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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if you realized this but you repeated the same section over many many times.
It ends with them getting their password to their new dorms then starts all over from the beginning.
It ends with them getting their password to their new dorms then starts all over from the beginning.
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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ummm...you might want to check your formatting. A part of the story was repeated like 4 times...
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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Actually, the whole story repeated 8 times.
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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WTF?!?! The same paragraph was repeated over and over again o_O
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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am pretty sure that you have been told this, but your chapter text keeps repeating itself. I do like the twist about the room assignments, though.
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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What happened? The first paragraphs just kept repeating. I liked it though I wish the first chapt. was longer but I guess the glitch interferred. Good idea for a story. Hope the next chapt is up soon.
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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Umm, not sure if anyone else has said anything but chapter 1 seems to stuck on repeat, the same 2 paragraphs are repeated quite a few times. The story idea seems interesting, not sure about the story just yet, but it's still to early to tell. Look forward to reading more
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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like an interesting story, but you definitely have a formatting/uploading issue going on. The story keeps repeating over and over again. You might want to see about fixing that so people don't get frustrated. Looking forward to reading more and seeing where you take it.