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for Halloween Holiday

by goldhorse

person MotekElm
schedule December 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Fun ghost story and Dramione romance. Plus some  Harry/Snape & Ron/Pansy cameos

person A
schedule May 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I mean, I was scared and at the edge of my seat but I enjoyed it. I hope you had this om ff.net as well so I can add it to my favorites; I find it more manageable there. Kudos.
person Victoria
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! From start to finish it was equal parts suspenseful and romantic. You do a great job of capturing the essence of Draco. He was the perfect narrator for the tale.
person HoneyAilish
schedule November 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading and loved it. It was a good way to get Draco and Hermione together in a single night and still ave a good story behind it. I just had a question about the end. Draco mentions the good things in his life, his kids. He as he as 4 with one on the way, but he mentioned 5 names: Scorp, Charles, Joan, Gabby, & William. Was just wondering about that. Anyway I just wanted to say that I greatly enjoyed the story. Keep it up.
person dweek
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story was a fun and wild ride! I got excited every time I saw that it had been updated!
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I quite liked your fluffy little ending! :-) I enjoyed Draco taking care of the evil original and that years later they still freed some to go on to their rest. That was a fun story! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story hun! I am glad to see such a wonderful ending. You had me thinking they would be the next ghosts! I love the use of the other ghosts names for the children, a great way to honor them.
person nari-chan
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
aww i loved the ending im happy they made it out and they had their happy ending i think that it is a wonderful idea to vist each year and see the ghosts again :) please write another story again soon
person nari-chan
schedule November 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow, they really make a good team working together .i am happy that they saved everyone and that they are safely outside but now what are our heroes going to do about themselves? i hope they can figure a way out and be ok. i cant wait to read the last chapter when you post it. thank you and update soon :)
schedule November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want to have sex like that!! Dayum!! I am glad they got to have a moment like that together before their possible end. Joan deserves a chance to get out, too. But, I am not sure about sacrificing themselves... I look forward to seeing you write them getting out and getting together in "real time." lol Thanks! HG4eva