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I've been reading this for over 24 hours and finally caught up so to speak. I love the story!!
It seems none of them can ever get a break. I hope in the long run things have a happy ending.
I would like to know clan's story. It seems you are hinting at him being related to Draco, maybe his 1/2 brother? Or am I reading too much into it?

First of all, Love your story and eagerly await new chapters! With that said, I hope Lukas, Damon, Jensen and Clay are all also getting punished. All of them disobeyed or questioned orders, yet Harry is the only who got punished. I can understand why he is confused. Fenrir tells him he is the highest in the pack, then the pack omega has to be dragged over to the clearing because he isn't obeying Fenrir. Jensen and Damon both argue and question Fenrir. As if that wasn't enough, without knowing what happened, Lukas calls Harry a whore as soon as they get back! Harry is probably feeling pretty low on the pack totem pole right now.

On another note altogether, I don't think the vow Harry took with Dumbledore will hold because Dumbledore has already broken it. He promised not to harm any of Harry's pack. The Carrows are under Dumbledore's authority, therefore crucioing Clayton violates the vow. Love your story! Please keep writing!

Poor Harry and Company!!! I can't believe these miserable excuses showed up again. Only 3 more chapters and a lot of tying up of plot points and showing all the happily ever afters necessary. I can't tell you how much I can't stand that Dumbledor of yours (actually I don't believe I ever like him in any of the stories!).

Well I have to say...you guys are the masters of the cliff hangers...and i am hooked. I LOVE this story! The characters and the writing are well developed and excellent. I can't wait for the next chapter!...Well actually yes I can wait, you've given me no choice ;-)

I'm having dark thoughts here. hoping that the chester family will be torn apart by them and let's not forget those three.

I love that they've got their little forest almost ready! I love that Harry's finally being honest with them, so hopefully they can beat Dumbles and Voldie and head back to the clearing!!!

I've been waiting for Clayton to feel like he doesn't belong and leave...is that where his story is heading?

a very good chapter really made my day! I love how sweet Damon is. And how utterly cute and adorable Micha is, thought not as cute and adorable as Harry though. Ohh Fen misses his little mate. Well, it got me thinking, imagine Fenrir taking Harry out for a date...i kept laughing at the image I created though it was because I imagined Fen and Harry in an amusement park.

The chapter was a good time...pure fun. I enjoyed the comment reply to a reader at the end also. Nice to see into the author's view of the story and that there is a plan to the story.

First and for most, I would love to say I really love he story but then I would also have to say to say that the story leaves a bad taste in my mouth. I say that mainly because, I actually hate harry in this story. He is spoiled and in all honesty to sensitive and wants everyone to bend to his every mood. On the other hand I love clay. His character is livily, fun and maybe a tad inmuture but who isn't. As I read through the story my thought were that clay was the punching bag of he story, but then when fen made the statement about needing an omega I knew it would come to pass that clay would be the true punching bag. Its sad because clay cares a lot and will go out of his way for his family, but they give his feeling and well being little concern. Hell he was ambushed, went through hell during his dententions, was bullied by his house mates, and is still suppose to act and be sensitive to everyone else when know one is even sensitive to his. At this point I think Clay would do better as a lone wolf. Romy doesn't deserve him, Harry no way in form deserve such a caring friend, because truly if he could yell and fuss and scream at His mate about going to school or alone time, why couldn't he stand up to fen about punishing clay. And to top it off he allowed fen to make him (clay) the lowest rank in the pack, nope not a chance with my best friend. When all was said and done he (harry) leaves to have sex... Even with all this- my dislike for Harry's characte, my disinterest in Romy character and my over the top want for clay to come out on top of it all- I really do enjoy reading the story. Even though I do admit at starting to read this story a while back and got really pissed at Harry's character so I had to stop reading it. Bit I am glad I started again because in all honestly clay is a character worth getting to know and being curious about.