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for Fragmented Soul

by StrawberryGirl87

schedule December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awww...Clay is such a sweetie. And I think the punishment is effective and Harry's learning. I do hope that this new pup won't be a threat to Fenrir's and Harry's relationship...lol sorry I was getting ahead of myself since its the first idea that came up my mind when I read that the pup is a she. But i really hope that she'll be just like a protective older sister for Harry...damn i hate it when my head begins these ideas i just crave for more. I miss our dear ol' Voldy, how's he? Any more evil plans? What about Siri? And Nell? Any chance of make-up sex for the alpha pair in the next full moon? How about Cedric? Oh, I know you have plans for him, but can I kill Dumbledore? Or maybe just curse him badly that you know...sorry for throwing a lot of questions :) but i know they'll soon be answered, right?? And thanks for the update!
schedule December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
can't wait till the 14th! and thanks to Damon for clearing it all up, Fenrir really is a man of few words. :) I want a hug from Niko too! thanks for the update :)
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!! Hope you update again soon
person delia cerrano
schedule December 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is still so good after all these chapters. The love stories between Fen and Harry, Callie & Jenson, Damon and Misha, Clayton and Romy are great. Romantic and frustrating...I just want to shake some of them sometimes. I wish Lukas would come to love Tessie. She's so sweet and someone strong, handsome, smart and a bit more sophisticated. She deserves to get a winner for a change. I'm not keen on Lukas sneaking off to see this mystery woman...kind of wrong some how.
schedule December 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Tissues!!!! Really, it's a very harsh punishment but I know its need to be done. I really hope Harry will learn....sigh. i never really realize how strong Fenrir is until he pull out that tree. Well...ta-ta...update soon!
person MrE-Quecky
schedule December 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lovely updates! Thanks for the work!
schedule November 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
the battle at the ministry is done at last...no worries at the delay spent the last weeks rereading some chapters i really love :) well, Gideon sure is still alive. Thanks for the update!
schedule November 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Maybe a little evil intention but now its just pure excitement of what they did, do and about to do. I'm curious as to how next chapter will progress. I just can't wait. I hope two weeks will there in just a blink of an eye. Ugh, I can't wait for the strays to be dead. Well, i have plenty on my death list but lets deal with the strays first.
person MrE-Quecky
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh, great updates! and how darn inconvenient that the Carrows saw them....
person littlepanther
schedule October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nope, no evil intentions this time...but urgh!! I just want to hit harry for being stupid. (but i don't want Fenrir's wrath in me.) Going to the ministry? Yeah, stupid...but i did enjoy his bitchy mood. Can't wait for the next chapter. Btw, any update on Sirius?