AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Fragmented Soul

by StrawberryGirl87

schedule March 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update! I literally jumped up and down when i saw you had an update :) Good thing Fen is so understanding but he'll be pissed at Clay. And Niko is just so cute...I just want to squeeze him so tight (May I?). Now, Remus will join the pack for the next full moon. i cant wait or whether Seamus will survive IF he ever turn into a wolf :)
schedule February 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
soooo.....what's gonna happen to Seamus now? Looking forward to the next update. I wonder what will Dumbles do now. When can we finally meet Robin? I'm curious about her :) How's Sirius by the way? Oh and, any progress on Severus' condition?
person Sup4Rii
schedule January 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing work. You should definitely be very proud of yourselves.
I'm glad also that the story has picked up pace - there was an area there that seemed to be several chapters of filler, and not much story line, but as you can tell, I persevered and am very happy that I did.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
person mre-quecky
schedule January 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wonderful updates all over, loved! Thanks for writing!
schedule January 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for the next update! Adorable Niko calling Harry 'mum' will Niko be calling Fenrir 'dad' soon?? I can't help but laugh at that image...wonder what Fen's reaction will be. :) thanks for the update!
person delia cerrano
schedule January 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Remus and Tessie? They are both so gentle and quiet. They would need protecting. Maybe Remus could toughen up if he had someone to protect and love of his own.
schedule December 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was literally bouncing up in excitement when I checked in facebook that you've updated. And it was really worth the wait... XD i think Lucius is the way he is because of the expectations of him as the Malfoy heir back then I can't help but feel sorry for him, if only he's given the choice to marry Chloe...oh and happy birthday to Fenrir too <3 thanks for the update! Till the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What happened to the Christmas Eve update??
schedule December 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe its already ch.74!! I can't wait till the 25th for ch.75 :) Poor Umbridge...not that I feel sorry for her. Lol. Soooo...Jenson knows thr truth, when will Nell meet the pack? I wonder what will her reactions be...I hope it won't be a heartbreak for Lukas :) thanks for the update!
schedule December 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more...lmao for this chapter. i could have smacked Cedric for being so damn persistent but where will be the fun in that? i think he'll not give up on Harry even he received such info, though they're false but Cedric doesn't know that, right? BTW. the vid Bicky made it awesome! I hope it doesn't really end that way....and thanks for the update!