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for Fragmented Soul

by StrawberryGirl87

person Ginevra_Riddle
schedule March 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
As always, love love love this fic!! I do wish you posted more often and that you'd kill Robin, or at least let Harry kill her. But Still an amazing fic!
schedule March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if Robin betray the pack?
person Littlepanther
schedule March 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
That last scene....I forgot how to breathe momentarily....looking forward to the next update :) Hopefully it will be the fullnoon.
person Littlepanther
schedule December 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!! Really worth the wait! Niko's back home :) finally....
person phoenix-rob
schedule December 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm so pleased Niko is back with his family - now to sort out the rest of the mess.
Clay is right Romy can't keep pushing him away at the pack.
Remus needs to get off the poison.
Seamus needs to visit the pack for next change.
Dumbledore needs to be incapacitated and Snape released so Harry can be whole again.
And I supposed the feral pack outside the wards and Voldemort need to be dealt with as well.
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo good!!!! I keep coming back and reading this story! Love it and can't wait for next chapter :) x
person Rii
schedule October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Just spent most of the last three days reading this. Fantastic work & cant wait for the next chapter!! (though i am slightly hating the cliffy... 😢 poor niko)
person phoenix-rob
schedule October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Niko, lets hope the paperwork goes through very quickly and he can return to the pack very soon. Dumbledore needs to pay. I haven't forgotten that he is still controlling Harry by holding Severus hostage.
It will be interesting to see the final two children that Fen bit to support Harry - how will they settle into the pack?
Remus needs to get off the potion and develop a relationship with Tess and Jaylon further.
Back at Hogwarts, Harry needs to bring Seamus into the group. Robin is just a pain.
Bring on the next chapter please.
person littlepanther
schedule October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
My list is getting longer and by list I mean the list of people I want dead...In this story anyway :) Poor Nico, I'll give him my favorite pillow for him not to be lonely. And I really hope Romy will make up her mind (did I said it right?) I'll also give harry all hugs to comfort him but Fen will not really allow me right? Thanks for the update :) <3
person phoenix9fire
schedule September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! You have to keep writing!!! I love the whole pack dynamic and the story is very well written :) can't wait for another chapter from you :P