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Oh how I'm wishing that it's Fenrir that has pin him to the wall ^_~ please update chapter 34 soon.

oh wow, just managed to catch up on this amazing story!!! which I discovered at a rather bad time, as I have a big exam coming up... but whatever, absplutely loooove this story and I hope you keep up this marvelous work!

Hey Strawb and Bicky. As I promised yesterday, hereby my revieuw: Another great chapter. I realy love the story. And weekly updates, wow...keep up the good work!
Lots of love

Love it, there were parts that I couldn't stop laughing ^_~ please update chapter 31 soon.

Feeling sorry for the predicament the pups are in, but I can't help feeling excited about Micha and Damon ^_^ I just hope Damon doesn't make the mistake by trying to hide once again what's going on between them both once Clay is back. Please update chapter 30 soon.

Yay! i finally had the time to read it all. I was forced to stop at chapter 17. Today i spent the hole day reading! It is still great!! And Micha en Damon are great together :)

Yay! They finally shared their first proper kiss! Go Micha it's your birthday! Lol, please update chapter 28 soon ^_^

That was such a sweet moment there at the end of this chapter, you can almost feel their love for each other, please update chapter 27 soon ^_^

Thanks for taking my review into consideration :) I am so used to being either ignored or called a flamer I hardly comment any more, which is a pity because I really only offer criticism if I think the overall story is pretty good but just needs a bit of tweeking so to say, Keep up the good work and looking forward to reading more :)

Good work so far, I do like that you are slowly building teh characters and that Harry is not pregnant at 15 or even eager to get knocked up ASAP. Thank the heavens. I do still wonder what they DO all day and how after being intellectually stimulated by his father from an early age, Harry is now completly fine with playing cards, sleeping, eating, cuddling and just mucking around all day. I took a year off to work retail between my degrees and I thought I would go stark raving mad without some intellectual stimulus. But maybe thats just me :/ I'm also gonna hafta call BS on the sex scene. Sorry. It was very enjoyable but there is just no way that a bit of spit and a few minutes of fingering( and that only for the 2nd time)would have been enough to prepare a 15 year old to take on a "eep worthy" penis. No way. A sphincter does not work that way. For one thing, spit gets ABSORBED. I know Harry doesn't feel pain but he must have been bleeding at the very least...I kept waiting for the " You're a submissive so your body makes natural lube" bit but it never came...