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for Fragmented Soul

by StrawberryGirl87

person Jan
schedule April 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Their almost home, can't wait for Harry and Fenrir's reunion ^_^ Please update chapter 38 soon.
person Magda
schedule April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You girls are really fast in adding new chapters (not that I'm complaining!)! I'm a little concern about new plot of Dumbledore and that this will somehow involve Romy and her biological parents.
Besides I wonder - is your Harry horcrux, or are you intended to leave this part of plot? I've been wondering about this since I start reading Fragmented Soul and I didn't find any hint about it in the text at all.

I'm looking forward for the next chapter! :)
person Jan
schedule April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait to see Fenrir's reaction when they get the news... Can't wait! Please update chapter 37 soon.
Thought I have been wondering if Remy truly needs to be so bossy, and pushy so much? It's like she doesn't approve of anything, and everything bothers her.
person Aots
schedule April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
(Awww) It's over already?? Awww ~
person Jan
schedule April 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, finally all three cubs are sleeping together, Clay needs this more then the other two. Please update chapter 36 soon.
person magda
schedule April 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, after I had read real chapter, I read fool teaser and I thought for a moment, that this is 36 chapter teaser and I think, I had a heart attack. You are very cruel! :P

And (as it's my first comment here) I'd like to confess my love to this story. For a moment in the past I didn't believe that motif with werewolfes at Hogwart would be nice, but it is!
And after this chapter I have a little dream, I would like parring Romy/Clayton/Draco :). It would be sa kinky and Draco is femine, a little at least! :P. Ok, I know it probably wouldn't happend, but hey! Girl can dream!
person delia cerrano
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sooo glad that Harry knows that Severus is still alive. Now he needs to know that Sirius is the one who is torturing him.
Draco is becoming a friend. That ought to help both of them. I feel so sorry for rash but so young and unsure of himself Clayton.
person Jan
schedule March 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nope, not Fenrir, but maybe next time? Please update chapter 35 soon ^_^
person LeVeen
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay two chapters! You two lovelies are spoiling me ;) it were great chappies. I do hope that Harry and Clay make up soon..poor Romy..it must be hard for her. I also hope that Dumbles won't do anything to her when she's alone with her birthparents.
person LeVeen
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh and a cliffie! You guys are naughty!