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for Better Late Than Never

by SlythindorMalfoy

schedule August 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I feel guilty for not reviewing sooner. I do so enjoy this story. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Drarry is my favorite. I love the build up so far between them, it helps to really set the tone.
person Kat
schedule August 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha!!!!!! She got hers yay!!!!!! I feel bad for Janes an Lily though.
person delia cerrano
schedule August 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 7 & 8: Wow! But I kind of expected the news about the children except I thought James & Lily would both be Cormac's. Can't wait for the "Sunday chapter". And also the next chapter I hope will also have Ginny and the guys finding out
about who the fathers are!!! I'll bet Harry still leaves James and Lily's trust funds in place and tels them that he will always be there for them & still feels like their father...which they, the brats, won't appreciate until their blood fathers (and their mother) don't take care of them as they are accustomed to. That's just the way Harry is...too good to be true.
person Kat
schedule August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! Can't wait till Ginny gets hers!!! Feel bad for James and Lily.
person staar
schedule August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story, please update soon to see what happens to bi*th......poor harry but he has Draco !!!!!!!!!see you soon !!!
person Amora Lee
schedule June 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait to see how this turns out
schedule May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
person delia cerrano
schedule May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter ended too soon!! I knew it...I just knew bratty James & snotty Lily weren't Harry's! Well lets see how they like and act around their blood fathers'. I'm surprised that Ginny hasn't found out that Harry shut her out of the money yet. I bet Miss Ginny finds some way to at least try to ruin Harry's reputation and his life in general and with Draco. After all how can she stand it...all that fame (the savior of the world and the head of the ancient pure blood death eater family) and all their money and she ruined for herself. Interesting that she thinks Harry can be brought around...she's not that pretty or smart much less nice to be with.











person Kat
schedule May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! Ginny is getting exactly what she deserves!!
person BAFan
schedule May 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7

Wow. Never would have guessed who the men were. Can't wait to read on!

I noticed a discrepancy. When Blaise gets the court date, Draco tells Harry: "'Right, well as you lot heard, the date for the divorce trial is set for January 3rd, which is a couple of weeks from now so we have to start preparing.'"

But later on you write: "Ginny blatantly ignored Cormac and focused on the crumpled notice in her hand, she saw that the court date was set for January 3rd, almost a month from now."

So is it two weeks or a month away? I vote for two weeks - gives Ginny less time to pull a fast one.*g*