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August 27, 2025 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so much!
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February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved this!!
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October 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful! I loved the way Severus reassured Harry that he was the one he'd chosen to be with; that was a lovely scene.
I do have one possible correction: "Her smile was a bit more solicitous than Harry was used to seeing and it caught him off guard. He'd not had a lot of reasons to consider her sexual side before, and certainly wasn't used to seeing it directed at him."
I think perhaps you mean salacious (lustful, lecherous), not solicitous (concerned)? Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!
I do have one possible correction: "Her smile was a bit more solicitous than Harry was used to seeing and it caught him off guard. He'd not had a lot of reasons to consider her sexual side before, and certainly wasn't used to seeing it directed at him."
I think perhaps you mean salacious (lustful, lecherous), not solicitous (concerned)? Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!
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October 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Normally, I would give a story like this a pass but I am really glad that I did not this time.
This was a very well written and enjoyable story. It was realistuc and believable with good characterization.
Thank you for sharing!
This was a very well written and enjoyable story. It was realistuc and believable with good characterization.
Thank you for sharing!
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October 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was written with great sensitivity. Great job.