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by Blankk

person Victoria
schedule August 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, like the refreshing portrayal of a Draco who isn't emotionally stunted and is willing to admit his feelings for Hermione in addition to being great in bed. I've read your Author's notes and don't agree that the story is disjointed. It's clear what's happening between Hermione and Draco and between Hermione and Ron. The dialoguw flows well and provides sufficient detail. I hope you'll continue it.
person cpetnm
schedule August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like it. More would be welcome!
schedule August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am thoroughly enjoying your story, I like how it's disjointed. Very interesting, please write more!
person Bre95
schedule January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. You are a very good writer and I like to see this story continued. I wish you luck with your writing and inspiration. I'll be looking for an update! :)
person Anonymous
schedule October 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this so much! I love the banter between the two and the hint of more in this relationship. Can't wait to read more from you!
person dramine
schedule October 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it grasps what I feel a romantic relationship would be like between the two. Scarcastic, snarky a little dark /kinky but they also know any can understand each other. Great job, please keep going:)
person Siona
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You should definitely keep going with this! I love it
person Selena Malfoy
schedule October 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I totally LOVED the first chapter! So good!!! I particularly loved the naughty bits with our two lovers. I'm so glad you're continuing with the story!
Please! Continue to update! xoxo SM
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. you have a talent.
person Alice
schedule October 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it, I'm quite into exhib humil fics but cute banter smut is. Amazing :') I'd love it if you wrote more of it, maybe oh the bin read up and then the struggles they have as a couple or something I don't know, I'm a reader not a writier, but I'm sure you'll come up with something :D