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for If Only

by Blankk

person Ari
schedule October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule October 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The way you portray the characters, and what they are going though. I'm really interested in reading more of your work, great job, keep it up.
person Sherlocked17
schedule October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the story(plotwise). The smut was excellent as well keep them coming(no pun intended)
person cpetnm
schedule October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I want her to move in with him!
person Victoria
schedule September 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love how your dialogue gives such detailed scharacterizations of Draco and Hermione. The way they interact seems like a natural progression -- a realistic and believable portrayal of how their personalities would evolve after the war and after Hogwarts as young adults. The sex scenes are great, too. Fine story so far. I'm eager for more.
person Sorcha
schedule September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely lovely. I love the way you've portrayed their relationship as something unconsciously easy, and filled with chemistry, but everyone has their hangups. Eager for more. :)
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
HERMIONE IS NOTHING BUT A SLUT, CHEATING AND NOT FEELING GUILTY, DRACO IS NOT BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hermione is a piece of SHIT. Hermione loves Draco? No, she are confusing it with lust .For Draco,this all lust .
person A_Diva
schedule September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It started a little rough, but I think you smoothed it out in the end.
person Anon
schedule September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Quite good, a different take on the relationship. I like it.