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I'm so sad you're not posting anymore stories. You are one of my top 3 favorite erotic writers ever. :(

Finished chapter three. The word"special" was used twice here that just shouldn't have been. "She touches herself in that special place" and at the end where Snape asks, "yes, but was it special?" Those just don't fit well. Other than that, looking forward to more chapters. It's a good story.

Very good story. I love all the playful banter! It was easy to see everything actually happening. You kept snapes personality and added to it. I loved his tender moments with Hermione, and his blatant answers with her friends. Looking forward to reading your other stories!

Hi, Wanted to let you know, that I find your story very exciting and sexy. I just finished chapter 3 and their sex scene is fulfilling, but I have 1 anatomical comment -a complaint actually. Hymen (or a barrier, as you called it) is at the opening of vagina and can be seen after parting labia, so Severus wouldn't push head of his penis and feel the barrier inside. Also just to add, the pain during the first time doesn't come just from tearing hymen, but from stretching the vaginal muscles too. Apart from that, I really wish I could be that virgin in bed with Severus instead of Hermione... Thank you Fox

I just finished chapter 8. I do love it a lot. It's very fast and it seems as if it all happened within 48 hours or less. Admitting love was a little too much too soon, but it's all very romantic :-)))))

My Dear Author, Thank you for this story. I must say I liked it a lot, so much in fact, that I was re-reading my favorite bits as I went. I loved the humor and their teasing, I loved sex scenes too -of course. The idea about teacher's bathroom was amazing, very fitting, I mean why shouldn't it exist? It totally should! Headmaster....freaked me out a tiny little bit, but it was very funny and pervy(it's not a bad thing, really...) I just wish it wasn't so fast paced, I wished there was a little more back story and more build-up. Still I'm jealous of Hermione, I want that particular Potions Master all to myself! Especially, when he's so passionate and lovely and so lickable/edible/fuckable...mmm Thank you Fox

Great fun! Thanks for the entertainment!

Absolutely loved the story!! It was really written in a way that could actually have occurred!

I really like how your story began and ended the same way.

I love this so so much. More please? Even though i prefer the more mystical snape than the snape that is so open about everything, i really enjoy this story. Keep going! (+++++)