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by Dazzlious

person Anonymous
schedule July 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love your stories!

schedule November 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Pretty interesting, in a completely-improbable-but-what-the-hell way. The way they both have prescient dreams is a really nice touch. The elevator scene is very well done: the build-up in the crowded lift, Hermione's growing deja vu, the breakdown, Yaxley's attack - and then the plot really thickens as it becomes clear that something bigger and weirder is happening between these two. Personally, I'm chalking it up to generic Mystical Soulmate Magic or simple sex-pollen. Yaxley is still essentially an OC, but you've sketched out a rather appealing personality for him here. Good to know, at least, that the mystery dream got both of them equally. Now shrugging and wishing them a happily ever after, if possible.
person CeliaEquus
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this very much. I was worried at times, but on the second read-through I was able to understand more, especially once I knew the content of Hermione's dreams.
person Mrs_HH
schedule October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure why, but the fics I've read with these two have always been extremely compelling and this one was no different. Thank you for sharing