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March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #24..
After reading #23 [where I have to say BRAVO to Draco], I'm starting to side with Draco, even to an extent
SEverus, on this. I understand Harry is hurt, BUT it would be different IF Draco & Severus took it upon themselves
to do such an horrendous act..and were in their right minds.
They weren't. They were victims of a spell put upon them by a couple of twisted Death Eaters who wanted to harm to ALL
three of them. It's not Harry's fault, it isn't Severus' and it isn't Draco's.
SO, to constantly call the two men rapists, when they weren't in their right minds, isn't fair to them at this point. Because
that is a harsh word. No matter Severus' feelings of Harry, he wouldn't lower himself to that level to do that to Harry and Draco
would rather beat the snot out of Harry, IF Harry did something to piss him off.
..and I was under the impression that the three men were on neutral grounds with each other, while Harry was protecting them.
With that said, when is Harry going to have that thought slapped into his head, that he needs to back off from those two and see to
the real heart of the matter of where the blame should REALLY lay?
After reading #23 [where I have to say BRAVO to Draco], I'm starting to side with Draco, even to an extent
SEverus, on this. I understand Harry is hurt, BUT it would be different IF Draco & Severus took it upon themselves
to do such an horrendous act..and were in their right minds.
They weren't. They were victims of a spell put upon them by a couple of twisted Death Eaters who wanted to harm to ALL
three of them. It's not Harry's fault, it isn't Severus' and it isn't Draco's.
SO, to constantly call the two men rapists, when they weren't in their right minds, isn't fair to them at this point. Because
that is a harsh word. No matter Severus' feelings of Harry, he wouldn't lower himself to that level to do that to Harry and Draco
would rather beat the snot out of Harry, IF Harry did something to piss him off.
..and I was under the impression that the three men were on neutral grounds with each other, while Harry was protecting them.
With that said, when is Harry going to have that thought slapped into his head, that he needs to back off from those two and see to
the real heart of the matter of where the blame should REALLY lay?
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March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see that they're getting along better and that Snape is working with Harry rather than against him now.
I think he gave Harry good advice when he told him to tell his friends.
I'm excited to see what will happen next.
I think he gave Harry good advice when he told him to tell his friends.
I'm excited to see what will happen next.
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for all of them since they haven't really worked it out amongst themselves yet.
Harry's resolve is breath-taking and devastating all at once.
I'm not sure if I reviewed this chapter already but I don't think I have, it's been a while. I'm pleased that I have all these chapters to look forward to though.
Harry's resolve is breath-taking and devastating all at once.
I'm not sure if I reviewed this chapter already but I don't think I have, it's been a while. I'm pleased that I have all these chapters to look forward to though.
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was awesome and very aptly named.
The pendulum spell was pretty cool. Harry did seem to be very dark and enjoying things just a little too much.
I'm starting to feel bad for Snape. He seems very stuck.
The pendulum spell was pretty cool. Harry did seem to be very dark and enjoying things just a little too much.
I'm starting to feel bad for Snape. He seems very stuck.
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. I liked that you included the consequences of Harry's actions.
And who knows? Maybe now the boys will get a small chance to get a bit closer...
And who knows? Maybe now the boys will get a small chance to get a bit closer...
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dum dum dum...
Voldemort. Wow. I definitely didn't see that coming. I can't wait to see how the rest of this unfolds and everyone's roles in it.
I'd also like to see how they clean up the mess of all the people in the manor and covering up that they've kidnapped them.
Voldemort. Wow. I definitely didn't see that coming. I can't wait to see how the rest of this unfolds and everyone's roles in it.
I'd also like to see how they clean up the mess of all the people in the manor and covering up that they've kidnapped them.
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
An even keel! Sort of.
I'm glad Harry is dealing with his pain. Malfoy and Snape were rocks in this chapter, I'm glad that they were there for Harry while he was spiraling.
I can't imagine a situation like the one they're in and what would happen.
I'm glad Harry is dealing with his pain. Malfoy and Snape were rocks in this chapter, I'm glad that they were there for Harry while he was spiraling.
I can't imagine a situation like the one they're in and what would happen.
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March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 23
Damn. This is one tangled mess. I feel for all of them.
Damn. This is one tangled mess. I feel for all of them.
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March 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
When you come down to it, weren't Draco and Severus raped? They had intimate relations with someone without the ability to give or take consent. Harry made the decision for all of them. I understand how this story is playing out, but the thought keeps coming back and I wonder if that's affecting Severus.
Looking forward to seeing how they figure this out. Right now its still a mess! Thank you for writing ^_^
Looking forward to seeing how they figure this out. Right now its still a mess! Thank you for writing ^_^
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March 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Better! So much better now that Harry has the truth to confront and worry over like a dog with a bone. He's had his head up his own arse so far that he can't see or hear anything outside of his own thoughts, so it's good that he has to listen to others and understand their feelings, too. Maybe now something progressive will come of this and they will get their proper revenge.