rate_review Reviews

A balanced conversation between Harry and Snape! Wow! You've had a lot of work to get them to this point.

So good to read this chapter and see things settle down at last between Harry and Severus. I can think of no other man I'd want at my side or at my back if I were Harry, than Severus. He's proven himself over and over again, as a capable and cunning man. And one that is devoted once he gives his word, no matter how much he snarks or snarls. If anyone can help find out the truth about Voldie returning, it's Severus. *breathes a long sigh of relief* Thanks!

Ch. 33

Thank goodness. Snape and Harry are *finally* able to have a civil conversation with each other. Very promising, very good chapter.

P.S. Forgot to say in my previous review how impressed I was by the ritual. Quite imaginative!

about 32...

So, is this story going into a second arc? I had the impression this story was
going to be 'short'.

That ritual was well-written and very imaginative. The rites you came up with, and the way that the three of them acted in concert was remarkable, and I'm so glad that they all got something out of it that eased the dark emotions that they'd been feeling since the bond was enacted. I'll be particularly relieved if this lessens Harry pre-occupation with his hatred and resentment and makes him more of a reasonable person. Hopefully that will happen with Snape as well. I'm tired of him being so ultra-Snapey.
I'm looking forwards to seeing just where the next chapters take us and what the three men will do now. There's so much that they could do with the bond, but the fierce individualism of Harry and Severus would make keeping it impossible. That's a pity. Thanks for another very good chapter, yours is a very good tale, and even when it is frustrating me, it's still impressing me.

Ch. 31

Wow. What a powerful scene. Loved the description of how the weight from their memories lifted from each one.

About 33...

..and that's that.

Very curious as to what the three of them will do now.

about #30..

Oooo to the weee! O_o Can't be anymore vindictive than that can we?
Too bad they haven't discussed staying in the bond where it can be useful in
other ways. In what ways, I'm too tired to think of them right now.

Amazing chapter. I love to see them working together finally, even if it is grudgingly. They are a powerful union when they are working together, ruthless and smart, and very difficult to beat. The curse that you have come up with to punish the Lestranges is brilliant, and I am looking forwards to their reactions when they learn of it, and understand that their goal has failed. I don't think there could be anything worse than being wiped from existence...to leave no trace behind. It is a very apt death for them.
Thanks for the update. Great job!