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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 40
Wow. So relieved that the Golden Trio are still friends. That conversation had me holding my breath. Actually, both of them did. I suspect Draco is also feeling especially vulnerable right now because of the way Harry moved away from his touch in Tarriash's office.
Eager to see what comes next....
Wow. So relieved that the Golden Trio are still friends. That conversation had me holding my breath. Actually, both of them did. I suspect Draco is also feeling especially vulnerable right now because of the way Harry moved away from his touch in Tarriash's office.
Eager to see what comes next....
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June 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #39...
In other words, Draco was trying to imply something here, like in the
last chapter...he wants to be close to Harry and it doesn't seem to be in
a platonic way.
In other words, Draco was trying to imply something here, like in the
last chapter...he wants to be close to Harry and it doesn't seem to be in
a platonic way.
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June 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Incredible! The ways and means the men used to get the information they needed were striking and difficult, and yet they did it as a united front, and as one unit, standing strong even when they took the time to question and restrain each other. They really are becoming a fearsome force amongst them, one that will soon be able to overcome anything I think. You've done a brilliant job reconstructing their bond to each other. Only now you've done it voluntarily, and on a level that will someday be just as deep as the original, but in a completely different way. Well done. I'm looking forwards to seeing what comes next.
Oh, and Severus' spell? Very imaginatively wicked, that one!
Oh, and Severus' spell? Very imaginatively wicked, that one!
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June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Now, I love Severus. :D Thanks for sharing. The progression thus far has been a marvelous treat.
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June 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think they should go back and kill Tarriash later on, once she's no longer protected by the hospital wards.
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June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo I love Sev's truth spell. So Dark and painful hee hee. Don't know how long Harry will allow it though if she's stubborn. Enjoying this story and the slow build towards some kind of triad relationship. Actually loving all your stories right now, insomnia is my friend after all LOL. Can't wait to see what's next.
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June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice spellwork, :D
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June 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #37..
LoL! Wow! Did Severus drop the C word on them? Children! O_O O__O
Okay I truly enjoyed this one, I think the nitpicking of Harry that
Draco was doing was equivalent of a boy pulling a girl's pigtails. :-)
..and is it just me OR is Draco trying to say to Harry what I think he's
trying to say, but with few vowels & consonants?
LoL! Wow! Did Severus drop the C word on them? Children! O_O O__O
Okay I truly enjoyed this one, I think the nitpicking of Harry that
Draco was doing was equivalent of a boy pulling a girl's pigtails. :-)
..and is it just me OR is Draco trying to say to Harry what I think he's
trying to say, but with few vowels & consonants?
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June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to Snape's modicum of planning. Gotta love a Slytherin State of Mind.
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June 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! You got Severus, Harry and Draco moved into a different plane of understanding in this chapter without a lot of yelling and screaming and disagreeing. They are all acting more maturely, and even striving to get along. I like that they are thinking and planning together, and seemed to have left their egos at the door, as it were. It should only get better as they continue to work together, and I'm looking forwards to that. I particularly liked you delicate explanation of just how Severus and Draco feel about Harry--one that they expressed to him in an admirable way.