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Ch. 3

Great chapter! Though I don't understand why the Healer couldn't have done her diagnistics and healing before talking to Harry. Wouldn't he be able to concentrate better if he weren't in pain? And it seems that Kingsley had good reason to look embarrassed, based on what we've seen so far of his Aurors' competence - or lack thereof.

Should be some interesting dynamics ahead between Harry, Draco, and Severus!

It is very interesting to see all three men trying to work through the problems that they have in the aftermath of what happened. Severus is confronting it head on, dealing with it as he's learned to deal with all of his problems, in the most direct manner possible. Draco can only benefit from being with Severus at this time, though, I have to say...Severus' very direct speech to Malfoy about who and what he is was a good wake up call for Draco. Harry, on the other hand, seems to be concentrating on the positive and pushing aside the negative. I think that might only get him so far.
You've started your story off with a 'bang'. (No pun or naughty thought intended.) And now you're developing it into a more thoughtful and expressive story that is demanding my attention. I can't wait to see what happens between these three men and how they work through this problem that they all share.

Ch. 2

*Shudder* This was really hard to read. The content, I mean. I don't remember a true rape scene like that in any of your other fics, but then with 260-something (?) stories in your repertoire it isn't surprising that I can't recall every detail. :-) This chapter was very intense and powerful, and Harry showed immense fortitude, not to mention concentration, but I wonder if it won't come back to bite him in some way. I sincerely hope that Kingsley forces him to get medical attention, because I can just see Harry downplaying his injuries and trying to deal with them on his own. Maybe Severus will be the one to insist on it?

I had to chuckle - you know, the dark kind - at Severus's comment that there wasn't a code of conduct to cover their situation. Yeah, no. And have to wonder how the safehouse was compromised. Is there a traitor in the Aurors? Grim times ahead, methinks.

Wow, so very difficult for all of them, now that they have their senses back. Harry made a very informed decision, and stuck to it, and in the end he was able to accomplish what he'd set out to do, but now they have to deal with the aftermath, and it will be very interesting to see just how all three of these different men come to terms with what happened.

really interesting story! I am usually not a fan of threesomes, but your stories are always so great that I had to give it a chance. I like Harry's character. He seems very rational and calm, but there is something dark underneath. I'm interested in reading how this situation is handled. They were able to get out of the ritual circle, but I dont think the bond between all three of them is so easily resolved.

Wow, you've worked really hard at making what could just be PWP into a viable and interesting story. Having set this all up you've actually made me very interested just how Harry is going to make this turn out all right. I'm very intrigued to see what you've thought of for the next chapter, even though I don't normally go for Harry and Draco in any combination. Good job so far.

Ch. 1

ANOTHER new story? When do you sleep??? :-D This one looks quite exciting, as usual, and as usual I'll be eagerly anticipating the next update!

Update soon!