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for The Wages of Going On

by Lomonaaeren

person ChelseaPlume
schedule December 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
At least there's more of a simmering rage now, rather than an outright fury, between the three men. At last they are starting to use their heads and not just let the heat in their blood control them. I'm sure that Severus is smart enough to eventually come around and accept the truth...he wouldn't have been a very successful spy if he couldn't bend to the situation. As for Draco, he's already smart enough to see to the preservation of his own life if nothing else...and that means he'll try to help the others too.
Revenge though...revenge is good. On that point all three of the men agree, and they might just find a common ground in the destruction of their enemies.
person jujukitty
schedule December 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
stupid stubborn boys, it's bad when draco is being the reasonable one lmao. keep up teh good work :D
person Genuka
schedule December 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
He found it? This is going to be a problem isn't it...
person ChelseaPlume
schedule December 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oof, so much to say and to guess at what's going on. Snape is mass of confusion and emotion, trying to figure out what is going on--wanting to be a part of it, and yet also wanting to stay out of it. If I were to guess I'd say he doesn't understand himself right now, and just why he's reacting the way that he is. Thanks for another update...I'm enjoying trying to winkle out the details of what is happening, and in trying to figure out just where you're going with this. It's very intriguing.
person BAFan
schedule December 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9

Unexpected twist there. Which, considering it's one of your stories, ought to be expected! *g* I really don't know what to say about this chapter, except it was certainly dramatic.
person Jan
schedule November 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 9 soon.
person Genuka
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry! Damnit man! You know it would serve you right if the bond apparated you, Draco, or Severus straight to each other! Bloody stubborn Gryfindor!
person BAFan
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 8

God. Harry's stubbornness might very well kill him. Surely Draco and Snape are feeling *something* that will alert them to this crisis! Waiting not quite as patiently as usual for the next update.
person Genuka
schedule November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Unless there's more communication, true communication between the three the bond's reaction is going to be vicious and try to force the issue(s).
person Jenn
schedule November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. Poor Harry. But I can understand why he might not want to see Snape and Draco right now. But if the bond is starting to react then I guess he won't have a choice whether he's ready or not.

Great story so far.