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for The Wages of Going On

by Lomonaaeren

person BAFan
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 43

So...are you planning a sequel? 'Cause even though the ending put a sappy smile on my face, it still really doesn't feel complete - well, not to me anyway. Regardless, it was a fantastic story! One of your best.
person chelseaplume
schedule July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! Somehow I didn't expect that it would end there. That there would be more and that Harry would truly begin to know that he had nothing to fear from Severus and Draco and what they'd found together. I guess I'm glad that he has the beginnings of that, though, and that he knows now that he can trust them. Thanks so much for laying a long and treacherous path to get to this place. It may have started out with a bit of a trope, but it really made itself into an involved and complicated story of relationships and trust. I have enjoyed it all the way along, no matter that it may have sometimes frustrated me. Well done. You've a wonderful touch with these characters.
person SP777
schedule July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about the end...

Well, the ending was unexpected, I kinda hoped they would have talked a little more about
what might happen between them & how they would work thru it, but I guess it went as far as
you felt.

Good story tho', despite my occasional need to strangle Harry.
person BAFan
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 42

Whew, that's a relief! Very interesting interruption to the ritual. I hadn't expected Draco to place that question above knowing whether or not Voldemort had returned. Really looking forward to the next update!
person SP777
schedule July 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #42...

1. Are you talking about a smushname or portmanteau name like Drarry for Harry/Draco? I
person chelseaplume
schedule July 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nicely done. You've got them all kind of tip-toeing around each other feeling out their way. Draco was way more forward than I'd have ever given him credit for, and Harry far more open to the idea than I would have thought. That means that now he'll be thinking about those things while they're apart, and I wonder just what thoughts he's going to have? lol I was also glad to see that Severus had put aside his snarkiness to answer Harry honestly when he asked about their continuing relationship. That was very mature of all of them.
Thanks for the update. I truly enjoyed reading it.
person SP777
schedule July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about 41..

Okay, now u got me curious...what name would be considered a good one for this triad?
person Naughty_megs
schedule July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! You are def one of my favourite authors on here! Keep up the great work.
schedule July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
lol poor Harry the former virgin who doesn't realize why being held against a wall is sexy. I liked how Severus caught Draco's reaction to that and how Draco caught Severus' reaction when Harry mentioned being equal with them. Of course they can't point everything out to Harry at once about what they want... but it's going to be fun watching Draco work for that closeness goal... and Severus too :)
person SP777
schedule July 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #40...

Well it just got complicated. Understatement much?