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for Black Phoenix

by Lomonaaeren

person Genuka
schedule November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hermione needs to get her head on straight but at least Harry has his alliance with the goblins.
person SP777
schedule November 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #7....

What restraint Draco has! I would have called her stupid....and completely ignorant. :-)
Hopefully the Common Sense Fairy will come by & whack the hell out of her with its wand.

I forgot about Blackthorne[?], he needs more to do. Otherwise, this was a good chapter.
schedule November 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter (Chapter 6) Thank you and I hope Draco can convince her ;D
person SP777
schedule November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #6..

I'm rooting for Harry, just for the record. :-) And I think he has some good ideas. Sometimes.

You know, Hermione is like that annoying fly that just buzzes around your head, begging to be
swatted. Buzz..buzz, just won't go away.
person Genuka
schedule November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yep, that's what I was talking about. Great idea about the goblins!
person BAFan
schedule November 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6

Ha! I wondered if that was Hermione; it was about time we heard from her again. This should be an interesting conversation! Also can't wait to see the goblins' response to Harry's proposal.
person Kain
schedule October 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dun Dun Dunn, Hermione is in the house lol. Draco may be a silver tongued Devil but he will have to pull out some genuine honesty if he is going to engage Hermione in verbal war fare. She is the brightest witch of her age and along with being an excellent bullshit detector and a walking encyclopedia of magic, is still someone who has a special place in Harry's heart, Draco needs to tread lightly.

She knows him more far intimately than a lot of the politicians he is trying to bring over to his camp do and beyond having quite a bit of damning info/stories on him, she is not impressed one bit by him and could derail his campaign if she put an effort into it.

It is natural that she would be wary of his intentions and want too look out for Harry in case he is being manipulated.

Well, glad to see her back and am stoked on how her confrontation with Draco will go.

Glad to see Harry is starting to think and plan ahead more and not just "doing things" without considering the consequences. With that much power, you need some personal limits.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-
schedule October 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow is harry going to make everyone a little demon to look after them :D
great story thanks for writing ;D
person SP777
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #5...

1. Sooo, how would you start a R rated story??? I'm curious to know AND
to see.

2. An independent nation? Well damn, talk about ambitious! But I think that would work. :-)
Why not? Diagon Alley had to start somewhere.

...and how old is Harry, because he sounds like an old soul in a young body.

3. Man, I always fantasized having an animal to bond with, of course you have your bird, but
birds are rather independent, more so than cats. But, I was always partial to having a dragon,
which is why I loved the Dragons of Pern series, then I thought having a tiger with wings was better
& practical.

I still do. :-)
person AlterEquis
schedule October 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay was gone so lon tathere was more then one chapter for me to read.
Will creating the cat not decrease his magic?

Love your writing!