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January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love all of these stories. And I hope Persephone is no where close to meeting her match. I'm hoping for another absolutely stunning display of raw power and utterly ruthless response to being attacked. Hoping....
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January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well......that escalated quickly....I mean that really got out of hand. Although it is good too see that Harry is not invincible and that his own familiar is his weak point. Clever(Suicidal) move on that Auror's part for thinking to attack the phoenix instead of Harry directly. Interested in seeing who made a move against Draco.
I know I have griped about Draco in the past and may continue to do so but I will admit that I enjoy how you have kept him true to his character as a morally ambiguous individual. Slytherin to the core and while by no means evil or sadistic he will always see how a situation can make him look good even while trying to legitimately help. Not particularly brave or altruistic but looks at his options before acting.
The single solitary downside to all this is since you wrote another story taking place at some point in the future showing Draco as minister and revealing Harry to be just fine it takes some of the tension away.
-waits patiently for next chapter-
I know I have griped about Draco in the past and may continue to do so but I will admit that I enjoy how you have kept him true to his character as a morally ambiguous individual. Slytherin to the core and while by no means evil or sadistic he will always see how a situation can make him look good even while trying to legitimately help. Not particularly brave or altruistic but looks at his options before acting.
The single solitary downside to all this is since you wrote another story taking place at some point in the future showing Draco as minister and revealing Harry to be just fine it takes some of the tension away.
-waits patiently for next chapter-
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January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 14
Oh shit! *waiting not at patiently for the next update* ;-)
Oh shit! *waiting not at patiently for the next update* ;-)
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January 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #14...
1 This is a declaration of war. The Ministry is pleased to inform Dark Lord Harry Potter that he is
now considered an enemy of state, under the Dark Lords Act (1998).
O_o
Okay, I admit I was right there with HArry. The image of a deserted town with tumbleweed blowing in the wind popped
up in my head along with 'Huh?' It sounded like an invitation to tea from the Ministry. They are PLEASED to inform.
*rolls eyes* They wouldn't have done VOLDEMORT that way.
2. Persephone didn't meet her match, that was low down & dirty!
1 This is a declaration of war. The Ministry is pleased to inform Dark Lord Harry Potter that he is
now considered an enemy of state, under the Dark Lords Act (1998).
O_o
Okay, I admit I was right there with HArry. The image of a deserted town with tumbleweed blowing in the wind popped
up in my head along with 'Huh?' It sounded like an invitation to tea from the Ministry. They are PLEASED to inform.
*rolls eyes* They wouldn't have done VOLDEMORT that way.
2. Persephone didn't meet her match, that was low down & dirty!
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January 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #13...
..and the winner of this chapter is PERSEPHONE!
LOL! Oh my gawd, that bird is a mess! :-) ...and Harry is actually
scary when he gets serious in that way of his.
..and the winner of this chapter is PERSEPHONE!
LOL! Oh my gawd, that bird is a mess! :-) ...and Harry is actually
scary when he gets serious in that way of his.
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December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 12
Damn, I hate that this has come between them. Well, if nothing else it ought to further relieve Hermione's fears that Harry is influencing Draco unduly.
Damn, I hate that this has come between them. Well, if nothing else it ought to further relieve Hermione's fears that Harry is influencing Draco unduly.
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December 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So from now on, every time the word "politics" comes up I am going to take a shot of bourbon. Joking joking, but seriously nice chapter and does it make me a bad person that I am slightly happy that Harry and Draco's relationship is not picture perfect?
It's just that in most of your stories that when Draco and Harry get going, they seem to gush at the mere thought of the other and one or the other seems to constantly have a hard on when the other so much as glances at him and it is refreshing to see some chinks in there armor since the relationship is still young. Another thing is that more often than not, Draco at times can come off as, well for lack of a better term, "clingy". I get that he adores Harry but he gets pissy if he is not told of every single action in Harry's day and he is not the sole focus of Harry's attention. He will have to learn that there will be times that Harry will have to roll the dice and make a decision without Draco's input.
Clever move by Harry to make Hermione the liaison with the wolves since not only will she excel at the job but it will placate her and keep her from coming down on him to harshly in the future. Anne is absolutely freaking adorable and it will be nice to see her slowly come out of her shell.
In the future will the Weasley family make and appearance? I mean Harry is setting up this grand new domain and most of his old comrades/pseudo-family/friends are nowhere to be found. Will his crew from the old D.A come to his side?
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
It's just that in most of your stories that when Draco and Harry get going, they seem to gush at the mere thought of the other and one or the other seems to constantly have a hard on when the other so much as glances at him and it is refreshing to see some chinks in there armor since the relationship is still young. Another thing is that more often than not, Draco at times can come off as, well for lack of a better term, "clingy". I get that he adores Harry but he gets pissy if he is not told of every single action in Harry's day and he is not the sole focus of Harry's attention. He will have to learn that there will be times that Harry will have to roll the dice and make a decision without Draco's input.
Clever move by Harry to make Hermione the liaison with the wolves since not only will she excel at the job but it will placate her and keep her from coming down on him to harshly in the future. Anne is absolutely freaking adorable and it will be nice to see her slowly come out of her shell.
In the future will the Weasley family make and appearance? I mean Harry is setting up this grand new domain and most of his old comrades/pseudo-family/friends are nowhere to be found. Will his crew from the old D.A come to his side?
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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December 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #11...
1. Okay, I know you're the author and you have the right to name whatever group
you want to name in your story, but...come ON, Knight of the Lightning Bolt???
Couldn't you have picked something... a wee bit cooler? I'm afraid to find out what
the name of the official court will be. Though I have a name if you want to see.
As a matter of fact, how about making that an inside joke with the characters, the name
of the knights changed three times before they settled on one that sounded right.
2. Did I read that right? Harry is thinking about putting distance between him & Draco?
3.All in all, I liked this chapter. Btw, I sent an email.
1. Okay, I know you're the author and you have the right to name whatever group
you want to name in your story, but...come ON, Knight of the Lightning Bolt???
Couldn't you have picked something... a wee bit cooler? I'm afraid to find out what
the name of the official court will be. Though I have a name if you want to see.
As a matter of fact, how about making that an inside joke with the characters, the name
of the knights changed three times before they settled on one that sounded right.
2. Did I read that right? Harry is thinking about putting distance between him & Draco?
3.All in all, I liked this chapter. Btw, I sent an email.
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December 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #10...
Oooo...looks like there's going to be trouble on the homefront, if Draco
& Harry don't get this cleared up between them. Talk about being inconvenienced. :-)
Is it just me or is YOUR bird a carnivore for flesh?
Oooo...looks like there's going to be trouble on the homefront, if Draco
& Harry don't get this cleared up between them. Talk about being inconvenienced. :-)
Is it just me or is YOUR bird a carnivore for flesh?
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December 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fair enough. I do however think he should have told Malfoy about the werewolves before responding.