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by Lomonaaeren

person Meechypoo
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry once again shows he's more powerful than most give him credit for and far more compassionate than most would be, even if it am cme back and bite him in the ass! Gorenson is a pain n the ass that just won't go away just because he thinks he knows what's best! Didn't Dumbledore and Voldemort both have the same problem?! Draco and Harry get to reunite under the approving eye of Persephone!

~~ Meechy
person SP777
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #16...

Oh lookie there! A cliffhanger! Yee to the freakin' haa!
You better come wit it next chapter with a spectacular scene, with
rescues galore, mah dear!
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry's free, my dear Unspeakables! And trouble beyond him is coming toward you. Perhaps now will be the best time to beg for your life, no, freedom. I feel pity for you lot, truly.
person Meechypoo64
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So Persephone decided that Draco wasn't going to moe fast enough for her so she made sure everyone knows what the ministry is really up to! I am always amused that wizards who are very knowledgeable tend to lock onto one theory and don't like to deviate from it. They decided that Persephone is just like Harry's horcrux so he must in fact be able to control her. When the reality is Persephone is a pure construct of some of Harry's darker magic and though she is ties to him throu that magic she is a totally sentient being! Draco is sending in the Calvary but lets see if he's really needed!

~~ Meechy
person SP777
schedule January 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #15...

Don't worry folks, Persephone will be back after these messages. :-)
Chick better come back with help, that's all I gotta say...

Hopefully Harry learns from this mistake....keep forgetting that he's still
young. :-/

...and yes it was a CLEVER dirty trick. :-)
schedule January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic I can't wait to see her revenge there is no way she would let someone get away with doing that to her
:-D
schedule January 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great, the Phoenix got away but Harry is still trapped. Perhaps she went to get someone to free Harry?
person BAFan
schedule January 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 15

Yay! Persephone's free! What would happen, I wonder, if she - or anyone, I guess - were to bring Harry a piece of Hogwarts? Say, a brick or something. Would that be enough to re-establish his connection with the magic? Of course, there's the problem of actually getting it to him.

Waiting a little more patiently than last time for the next update. :-)
person Meechypoo64
schedule January 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As usual Harry's magic does something no one was expecting, including himself. Also, why is the evil doers have to make a speech when they should just eliminate their problem and be done with it...lol. Cue Bond music!

Of course, Persephone will be back and it wouldn't surprise me if she brings Draco!

~~ Meechy
schedule January 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ah shit! Harry! Damn it! Should have stayed on the Hogwarts grounds...