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for Black Phoenix

by Lomonaaeren

person qwerty
schedule February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
....do they really seek sanctuary if they were trying to control Harry with their allure? Or was that an unconscious blast of allure bc there were so many of then?

hmmm great chapter.
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i normally review on ff, but it's being a cow atm. (that and i've lost my password for aff. >.>) wow, sephy really has done a 180 personality was. after the hostility she had first off, no wonder har is twitchy.
i agree with draco. chaos and misfortune to their enemies... with a special Rita twist. mwhahaha.
Veela huh. goodness, hogwarts is become practically a magical creature/being reserve.
can har extend hogwarts main 'body' to create extra room/ quarters as needed (making hogwarts larger) or is he limited to changing things about in the current castle plan.
person Meechypoo
schedule February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry's learning that he can't jump into every situation by the seat of his pants and expect his followers to all be happy. Draco expressed his point far better than Greenbush and Harry is more apt to listen to Draco anyway.

~~ Meechy
person minieegold
schedule February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for new chapter,I love this story so much💕
person SP777
schedule February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #19..

Well that was an interesting interlude. O_O
Maybe the werewolf will see Harry as an alpha before the
night is thru, but this was different...and good to see Hermione
wasn't her usual annoying self.
person Meechypoo
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
now that was an interesting way to tire out a werewolf not in his right state of mind!

~~ Meechy
person SP777
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about 18...

One word: intrigue

By the way, how far you going with this?
person SP777
schedule January 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #17...

Damn...Harry didn't need nobody to come and get him, did he? :-)
AS it should be....

..good to know the Weasley-Granger team will always be stubborn & needlessly hardheaded
when action should be taken now.

So, glad you put that kiss in there, fitting end for this chapter
I should say, all's well...for now.
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well... there went THAT disguise... Ooh! More love-makin' time?
person BAFan
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 17

Yee-haw! I would love to see a picture of Harry riding his platform like a surfboard through the Dept. of Mysteries! Well done, Harry!