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for Black Phoenix

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #25..

Just throw a few Death Eaters Persephone's way..and all will be well.
Seriously though...what about those who are on Deathrow/Azkaban? Couldn't she have
those bodies once they are dead?
person BAFan
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 24

Whoa.
schedule March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh poop... so Harry now finds out that he is basically going to have to do human sacrifices to keep Persephone alive? That is going to be exceptionally hard on him and I wonder how he is going to get around that problem.

A great new chapter to the story and I'm anxiously awaiting Harry's solution to this dilemma.
person Meechypoo
schedule March 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Harry is a real quandary now. How is supposed to feed human flesh to Persephone, live flesh at that, and still maintain bothnhis sanity and the goodness that lives in his heart. He would begin to become a true "Dark" Lord if he starts feeding her people just to keep her alive! Nothing good can come of it and it makes me wonder if Gorenson somehow knew!

~~ Meechy
schedule March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Gorenson is a 'True Dark Lord' behind the scenes, cloaking himself in 'the Light' but actually being just as evil as Voldemort was.
A great new chapter to the story. I don't usually like yaoi stories but this one is good enough to make me overlook my usual aversion to them.
person Meechypoo
schedule March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
uh oh, Gorenson is back t it again! It's a little scary just how much power this man seems to hold and the fact that no one really knows who he truly is! For both Rosenthal and Draco are this nervous, we should be even more so.

~~ Meechya
person Ciara_D
schedule March 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this one, for the political drama and for the powerful Dark Lord Harry part. Thank you for continuing to update!
person SP777
schedule March 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #22..

It sounds like they're growing...a tree. O_o
person Meechypoo
schedule March 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The Veela are certainly a distrustful group. The one thing Harry can't stand is someone lying to him and keep their secrets until they think someone else needs to know. Dumbledore biggest flaws! Should be interesting to see what happens. I can't wait until hary figures out The real reason for Persephone's change.

~~ Meechy
person Meechypoo
schedule February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Draco is successfully sowing the seeds of discontent through his use of Rita to make sure that she starts looking into the things he wants exposed. He really is a master at politics. Tough I love the new and moreover Persephone, I too, like Harry find it somewhat disconcerting as to what changed her attitude so drastically. Yes she was captured along with Harry but after escaping I would think she would be more bent on a birds style revenge. The only theory I have on her about face is that she realized Harry expended a good portion of her magic just to make sure she escaped even if he might not and because of that she truly bonded like a standard Phoenix and was reborn from the "ashes".

~~ Meechy.