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for Black Phoenix

by Lomonaaeren

person BAFan
schedule April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 29

Ooh, you evil, wicked person, you! *g*
schedule April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Not the best time to plan an assassination... Tons of witnesses, reporters and Dark Lord Potter. Not good. Then again, that's probably what the assassin wants.
person SP777
schedule April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #29..

What. The. Hell??? What kind of ending was that ?!?!
person Ciara_D
schedule April 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting development. I want to see what gets pulled next!
person Ciara_D
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it's nice to see Draco and Harry being at a difference of opinions and still getting on. They've both grown of late.
schedule March 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry! He's phoenix's illness is tearing him apart. I hope that Gabrielle has a solution; a better solution than Harry's.
person SP777
schedule March 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #27..

If Harry isn't careful, he'll wind up paranoid..or run himself ragged. Hopefully, he
gets the answer he needs.

By the way, what happened to his first Knight???? Did you forget about him? Hell I forgot
his name my damn self.

Oh, how about 'Order [Knights] of the Valiant' as a name for the knights, with a lightening bolt
encased in a lilly as a signet/emblem. :-)
person amothepirate
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Persephone. She's kind of a twat but one that grows on you.

Lovely chapter, great development as always! :)
person SP777
schedule March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #26..

There's all this talk about human flesh that Persephone needs, but...what if she needs
just flesh period? I think fresh raw flesh is what she needs in her diet.

By the way, how is YOUR bird?
person BAFan
schedule March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 25

Wonderful sex scene, just lovely! Beautifully hot without being explicit, not that I object to that, you understand. ;-) Really curious to see how Harry goes about feeding Persephone. Wonder if he can't conjure up something like a clone that's technically alive but is brain-dead and unable to feel pain.