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for Black Phoenix

by Lomonaaeren

person Genuka
schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The companion was a good idea. Are they bound together or are they completely separate?
person BAFan
schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4

Is the Wizengamut made up of complete imbeciles??
person BAFan
schedule October 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4

Oh yes. That was perfect! Now I can't wait to see what you come up with to spoil their afterglow. It may not be immediately, but it will happen, I have no doubt.
person SP777
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

Oh my GAAAWWD! Stop with the mentioning of the 's' word! I'd rather take a severed head
than that!

annnnd yes my dear you came thru finally! This was deliciously hot, thorough, AND a long
time coming. :-)

I was starting to believe you lost that touch of yours. Seriously...since most of your sex scenes
have entered the PG rating. :-p Well they have!

There's nothing else to gush about, soooo...see you next time!
person Meechypoo64
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I think I need a cigarette or a cold shower after that! I love how Harry tantalized Draco both with sex and magic!!

They really are a great pair together.

~~ Meechy
person Genuka
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*cackle* He's finally completing his claim on Draco. :D
person Anon
schedule October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
once again har has bitten off more than he can chew... eh, at least he has the power to back it this time. (centaurs and merefolk and phoniex s OH MY!)
well, Sephie the phoenix is a sort of anti moral guide... if she thinks it's a good idea in the crush, kill, destroy front, it's probably time to take a step back and re examine things.
tis a pity mio couldn't hack things. a chance to study sephie and any references to a black phoenix would have probably sent her it wiggles of delight. i bet the unspeakables are drooling to get a look at her.
i wonder just how many critters are going to make their way to har's banner.
i read somewhere once that someone challenged a Shaman with 'are you a shaman or a showman,' to which the shaman said 'yes.'
you got to be a bit of both to make it work. Har's just putting a Snark Lordly twist on the idea.
this is so much fun. screw dark lords... I'll take a Snark Lord any day.
person BAFan
schedule October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3

person BAFan
schedule October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2


"Persephone looked at him smugly, and lifted her tail to perform an even less pleasant operation down his back."

ROFL! Don't know why I didn't review this chapter when it was posted. *scratching head* Anyway, I felt absolute kinship with Harry when he was talking to the centaurs, 'cause I had no frigging idea what they were talking about either. Seems as if Persephone is going to be the devil on Harry's shoulder. Should be interesting.
person SP777
schedule October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
about #3...

Yes, gosh darnit...there's nothing like eating a bowl of cereal, when all of a
sudden the author decides to give you an imagery of flying snot. Thanks a lot! *thumbs up*
Every story I've read, I don't eat...decide to eat during this one, get wonderful visuals.

ANYway, this was a nice interlude between them, tho' I miss reading your ACTUAL description
of.....physical contact between the two. I must be the only one here who realizes you actually
went beyond the call of duty at one point in another life.

ANYway, I like the addition of Persephone she adds a certain dynamic...and I can tell you like birds
more than cats.