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for Black Widow

by goldhorse

schedule October 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I oh, so loved the punishment. I hope Draco will be able to give Hermione "proper" spankings in the future. I am hopeing that this is a VERY drawn out process to remove the curse *giggle*. I know that sounds bad, but the longer it takes, the more smut to be had; and I am very greedy about good BDSM smut!!!!! More, Please!!!
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You are crazy darling. How you come up with some of this I will never know but it is always fascinating to read!
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Now this should get interesting.... :)
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Tease. You always pause right before a really good scene....But then, you generally make it worth the wait.
person Gruffard
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A very intersting mini-series. A bit dark, but fun read. Looks like the lemons will start soon, but best of all, the story has plot. Good well written plot.

Thanks for the read, looking forward to the rest of the story. Your muse deserves praise, don't make her pout.
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It was awkward, uncomfortable, confusing (for them, not me) and sad, but written perfectly. lol I am sad for him that this may be the only way for him to finally get her. But, I hope when they do break the curse, she gets the opportunity to severely, painfully and for a long, long time to come, punish her tormentors! Thanks again and I am really not unhappy that it is going to be longer. lol :-) HG4eva
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I understand that this was an awkward sex scene to write; but your muse allowed it to flow so beautifully! The sweet torturous anticipation was WONDERFUL! And your muse has a wicked side, I see...leaving your readers with a cliffie!?!?!?!?! Oh, wondrous muse, please don't make us mere mortal wait too long!! More, please.
person Roxie
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Love it.
person chm01
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it, more creative and refreshing that the site's usual dramione
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You and your evil cliffies!!! They make me sad faced!! But also excited to read the next!!! Also congrats on distracting me from Topsyturvy.. I went to check something cuz navigating on here is easier than navigating my word document and saw this lovely update!