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for Black Widow

by goldhorse

person barrister7
schedule October 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love cake too - and I love this story! Fantastic! Can't wait to see where it goes!
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am glad she realizes he's actually helping her. And, I love that she doesn't think she should be reacting to his actions like a... like a... lol Severus was spot on and I look forward to seeing them happily fighting together to bring down the ass who did this to her. I wasn't surprised the key was Ron, though I hope he calms down enough to be a working key. Thank you! HG4eva
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED this chapter. There was just sooo much to make me all tingly, hot, weepy, and happy about. Talk about twists and turns...I almost got whiplash!! I agree with Snape, Hermione likes the rough stuff a little too much. And the fact that Kingley wants her as part of the team, only bodes well for our dear dark Draco. But the Ron trigger could be a major problem. So I have no choice but to BEG, BEG, and BEG your muse to return and give us some more sex and plot twists...PLEASE!!!!
schedule October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AAAARRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! You're mean. You know that? Of course you know it and you love the screams of frustration we unleash when you leave us hanging. lol Evil goldhorse. lol I love it though. Finally got to catch up. :D
person Trelweny
schedule October 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh wow...! O_O Am I interpreting this right: Collin Creevy had a lover? O_O Or maybe I'm pulling at straws here. Quite possible.
I'm loving the suspense of mystery even as it is totally irritating at the same time.

I love the backstory with and between the Knights. Vampire saviors for Albus and Severus, hm? At least if they can clear Hermione of her connection there's a chance for her and Draco, if she becomes one of them. With the Knight's pledge of no marriage... is that no children too?

Thanks so much for writing.
person Trelweny
schedule October 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was thinking about this story while mowing the grass today when I found my thoughts focusing on Harry being able to calm/soothe Draco because of the lingering trace of Voldemort within him (Harry). It had me wondering if they tried having Harry touch, speak, or even order Lucius and Narcissa at any time since the fall of the Dark Lord. Now I can imagine it likely wouldn't do Much, considering the length of time they were subjected, but perhaps it would do Something; maybe enough to have short almost visits.
Just an idea.

Thanks for writing.
person Barrister7
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story - can't wait to see how it ends!
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
O.o More twists and an evil place to let of. So typical of you lol. Great chapter hun, I love the interactions between Harry and Draco.
schedule October 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love that EVERYONE assumes that Draco stole Harry from Ginny. Did no one figure that maybe Harry didn't want Ginny and that 'The Chosen One' might have stolen Draco from someone else?!?!?!?! No, well everyone wants to believe the worst about Draco and that Harry can do NO wrong...even Hermione. I can't wait to see what else happens in the cell that Harry and Snape will have to watch!?!?!?! More, Please!
schedule October 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting twists! Poor Dray, this has to be killing him. He gets what he wants, but not really.