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by goldhorse

person MB 3
schedule October 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know this isn't the answer, but for some reason, I can totally see Percy being the Master. I think he's too old though. Still, I thought I'd share.
schedule October 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really do feel badly for everyone involved, except the evil ass who did this to her. I hope she can get past her humiliation and pain to see that he really does love her and want only the best for her. Thank you and Happy Halloween!! HG4eva
person MargeW76
schedule October 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I need more ASAP!!! So addictive!!!
schedule October 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* I plan on eating pounds of candy, just not all at once. Great chapter! Can't wait to read more.
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you sick woman, you know how to torture us all!!!! You really love it, too! lol I don't think she's going to resent him and push him away though.... Yeah, she might still keep Ron at a distance, but I think she's past the point of holding grudges. He sacrificed his time and safety to help her and I think she'll understand that. She might not be too keen on the idea that he just sat back and let Kingsley decide where her life should go, but she'll still be reasonable.
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like that Draco is jealous and Weasly is still clueless. Exhibitionism?!?!?!?!? I wonder, who, other than Snape and Harry will Hermione be preforming in front of *snicker*? Also, I have a love/hate relationship with cliffies...so I can't wait to hear more about the collar!!!!
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ignore my last message XD That was meant to go in your Halloween one. ^^; Loved this chapter and can't wait to see what crazy thing you have come up with next!
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I am really glad you figured out the mistake quickly, because I was bummed to not get a new chapter last night. lol I am really glad they are close to breaking the curse, but I hope they can still find the person behind it. And, I actually felt a little bad for Ron in that chapter. I felt badly for Draco, too, since he assumes this will be their last time. Looking forward to more really soon! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I do so love a good spanking too!! Especially when it is followed by a hard fuck with Draco *Mmmmm*!!! More, Please!
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Is it bad that I'm hoping she hates Ron by the end...? Cuz I have this intense feeling that he's going to do something to fuck this whole thing up.... That seems about his style.... He's a brilliant strategist, but he doesn't always think things through enough to actually use his gift....