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for Black Widow

by goldhorse

person kit
schedule November 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy epilogues. its a nice way to round a story out.
i was slightly confused about this scene:

"Ron smirked.
person white dragon
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
a triumph as usual. thank you so much for a great story while i have been ill. please continue writing.
person Victoria
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic story. You have a gift for narrating through Draco's eyes. You also write Dom Draco superbly with amazing sex scenes. Finally, you brought lots of interesting magic to bear on this story -- bloodstones and sex magic and enslavement potions and more. It was a true Harry Potter story and not just a muggle story line with wizards and witches as characters. Loved it.
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am more than okay with epilogues, and truly enjoyed this one. Everything was wrapped up perfectly and I love that they all got children. :-) Ron cracked me up!! Thank you and I look forward to more from you soon! HG4eva
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story hun. I really loved reading it. Nice twist at the end! Never would have thought of Justin!
person Trelweny
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Kingsley!! ^_^ I was so upset at the possibility of all those lovely genes lost forever, despite how wonderful the story and loves and relationships were, but with a little almost Dumbledore-like manipulation he (and you dear author) settled my issues. Booyaka!

I'm glad we also were granted the joy of seeing Draco's parents healed and released from St. Mungo's. Do they know of their grandchildren? And if they do... I wonder what they think of them? Obviously they cannot know they are Draco and Hermione's Precisely... but do they know they're Malfoys underneath it all?

That little bit with Ron knowing and keeping a secret at the end was sheer brilliance. While I feel he's not right for Hermione I grow tired of fics where he's slurred badly. It was nice to see him get his little bit of awesome.

Thanks so much for writing.
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another rousing success, milady. I love your epilogues. Maybe at some point both sets of twins can use their actual family names...that would be nice.
person Bananas4u
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue please! !
person barrister7
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story! Hate to see it end - would love to read the epilogue and find out what happened to Lucius and Narcissa...
person Christopher
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Guilty of being sympathetic? Sorry, but that just amounts to thought crime in my books and is truly insane. Story was good until that insanity popped up in this chapter but after that, it totally went off the rails.