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by BurningNebula

person delia cerrano
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you stopped there! You couldn't let us read what happens when they wake up together...or at least what I hope happens?
schedule October 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story. Interesting setup. Liking the interaction between Harry & Severus. Looking forward to reading more of your story. Thankyou.
person Tamafluff
schedule October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
>.< I love the idea for this story!! Is the whole thing going to be only Sev's POV or are we going to see how much harry is affected by this wonderfully lost man?!? Awaiting your updates with eagerness :)
person ChelseaPlume
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, every time I read a new chapter I'm just more and more impressed with the depths you're putting into it. The slowly evolving relationship that Harry and Severus are building, and the commonalities that link them, are making for some really intriguing reading. Thanks for putting so much effort and care into crafting this. I can't wait to see where you go with it as the story grows.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Still reading...atching for next chapter. Not sure what I think about them in this story.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Now Harry's actions make more sense. But wasn't Teddy the son of Remus, a werewolf, & Tonks an amanigus? So wouldn't he be a werewolf anyway? Or at least there was a 50/50 chance he would be?
person Jaybelle
schedule October 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful so far! This is a very unique plot line that I've never read before which really intrigues me. I can't wait to read more! Hope the next update is soon!
person M3
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi,

I really loved second chapter! They act so cute in the end :D I like how u write and it's getting intriguing.
Update soon!
person Thatsallwegot
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far. Your writing style is excellent. I look forward to reading more of what you have to offer.
person M3
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hey,

I really enjoyed ur story, Harry and Severus are so lovely, can't wait till u update. Remember to continue soon please:)
the plot sounds great and u write nicely. It's nice to read different kind of character and a little different point of view:)