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by dweek

schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wo-who SHE'S BAAACK!!!!! I am so glad to see you. I LOVED the chapter, especially Daphne and Draco; which surprised me. We are supposed to be rutting for Ginny and Luna; aren't we? OK, I do need to say...you need a Beta *please don't smack me*. I am even volunteering for the position. You know how to reach me if you say yes. Enough about that because; I WANT MORE. MORE, MORE, MORE...pretty please!?!?!?!?!
schedule January 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 2 & 3. I like that George is now in the picture and Ginny has some family around. I am anticipating Tracey getting what she deserves *evil grin*. But most of all I can't wait to see what the deal is with Luna!!!!! More, Please!
person B
schedule December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi again please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens
person Kain
schedule November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, missed this story.

person B
schedule October 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please update soon im really enjoying reading this follow on from Face of Evil :)
person CUSPACECOWBOY
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god dont make Luna into a bruce wayne/ Batman character I'm sorry that just sounds ridiculous
person Kain
schedule September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, happy to see this sequel.

Hmm lets see here, Large mansion, huge inheritance, new bad ass skills, a loyal servant, A carefree harmless attitude too mask true nature, and a costume used to hide identity and strike fear into evil.....................Luna.........is the God damned Batman lol. Loved seeing her go all dark knight on that asshole.

Both her and Ginny are learning to play the game much better. And now she is planning to bust up some muggleborn camps while making voldemort piss himself? That girl is a certified bad ass now and Blaise is none the wiser.

speaking of the camps.....YIKES. Nazi style camps, Auctions? This is some dark shit right there. I love how both Ginny and Luna are setting up to help the Muggle born's in there own ways while not knowing the other is doing it. If Luna can't free them all then at least Ginny can help set up new laws to help protect those that do get auctioned off. And Ron's got some rebellion cooking up and I loved the talk between him and Luna, the man does not get enough credit for the crap he has put up with being Harry's friend. With all of these factors working against him ya just know that Tom's resources will be stretched and there is still that pesky little problem of Harry still residing in his body. I also liked this little line from Luna:

person chm01
schedule September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing that either Tom absorbed Harry, he possessed him, or that he is mostly dead.
schedule September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that your sequel is now posted!! I really like the LV/Ginny relationship with a little Riddle and Harry thrown in. Thank you for posting this today. I needed it after waiting two hours for someone to call me for a phone interview. I was soooo pissed. I needed some good old fashioned escapism! More, Please!!!!