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October 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Last chapter for book 2 eh?
-Ah the downside of the Rebels action's, the Weasey's are once again back where they started in the new order. Point's the Daphne for trying to stand up for them. Although Tom probably won't hurt them too badly as he could use them as leverage to get Ginny back. Hope Fluer is okay, given that she has a baby with her.
-Loved seeing Blaise of all people call Luna out, she might be the one erson getting true results but she also needs to keep her moral's or she could end up becoming just as bad if not worse than the current lot running things.
-Seriously hoping that the rebels who hurt Ginny get what's coming to them. And poor Ginny realizing that it was her own brother who gave the go ahead for her too be raped because they felt they couldn't trust her if they had let her in on things.
-Harry's and Ginny's reunion was perfect. I like how Ginny owns that she is in love with both Tom and Harry.
-Ah the downside of the Rebels action's, the Weasey's are once again back where they started in the new order. Point's the Daphne for trying to stand up for them. Although Tom probably won't hurt them too badly as he could use them as leverage to get Ginny back. Hope Fluer is okay, given that she has a baby with her.
-Loved seeing Blaise of all people call Luna out, she might be the one erson getting true results but she also needs to keep her moral's or she could end up becoming just as bad if not worse than the current lot running things.
-Seriously hoping that the rebels who hurt Ginny get what's coming to them. And poor Ginny realizing that it was her own brother who gave the go ahead for her too be raped because they felt they couldn't trust her if they had let her in on things.
-Harry's and Ginny's reunion was perfect. I like how Ginny owns that she is in love with both Tom and Harry.
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October 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
since I have already reviewed for this chapter, I just have a question instead. Since not every pure-blood is a bigot or looks down on Muggleborn's, would some of them have participated in the auction simply to give the muggleborns they bought a better life than the ones they would have if the actually bad pure bloods had bought them and even perhaps smuggle them out of the country? It would be beyond depressing if every pure blood simply fell in line with the new status quo the current regime has put in place.
Almost to the end eh? Is this the final part of the story or will there be a next series taking place after? Either way, it's been a fun ride.
Almost to the end eh? Is this the final part of the story or will there be a next series taking place after? Either way, it's been a fun ride.
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October 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of wanting the DA to get their asses handed to them. Ron working with a man that raped his sister. I hope Tom does some damage to them. I mean Harry was the best in the DA and he had trouble against Death Eaters when they meant business.
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October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah I see, totally didn't know that lol. I think I will hold off on reading the next chapter after this until it's posted here though. It will be something to look forward too.
-not even a min into seeing each other and Daphne and Hermione are already being catty. I Like it when Ginny shows back bone and lays down the law. It was the right thing too do morally speaking at least and in a world where all things bad things are happening sometimes doing the right thing, even at a great cost goes a long way.
-omg that Weasley reunion.
-a bit of a time skip if were already getting to the big royal wedding. Luna and blaise make a surprisingly okay pair. Even if she is working undercover to subvert the new regime and working in some capacity with the rebels. Did the auction still happen or was that postponed due to the attack on Ginny.
-kind of a low blow to blame the current state of affairs on Hermione and the others who fought against Voldemort since they were the only ones willing to take a stand.
-Millicent does raise a good point about the fact that there are very few 'good' guys left, it's all about who wins and who loses now.
Okay on second thought I guess I will read chapter 13 and add it to this review as well-
Chapter 13:
-Daphne is still a Slytherin and will play the odds to her advantage, but it is sweet how she is with Ginny. Protective and caring.
-Tracey you crazy little *&%$. Thought she would try something eventually although it was stupid too think she could fool anyone for very long.
-Ginny is the ultimate cinnamon bub, seriously even when the girl tried that stunt, she is still willing to forgive.
-So Tom says Ginny's name when he is with Stacey eh?
-Luna playing both sides of the field and keeping secrets from both since elements on both sides are too stubborn or hesitant to do what she says.
-Well Stacey is screwed when the Dark Lord makes time for her next.
-Lady Mercy, fitting I suppose.
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-not even a min into seeing each other and Daphne and Hermione are already being catty. I Like it when Ginny shows back bone and lays down the law. It was the right thing too do morally speaking at least and in a world where all things bad things are happening sometimes doing the right thing, even at a great cost goes a long way.
-omg that Weasley reunion.
-a bit of a time skip if were already getting to the big royal wedding. Luna and blaise make a surprisingly okay pair. Even if she is working undercover to subvert the new regime and working in some capacity with the rebels. Did the auction still happen or was that postponed due to the attack on Ginny.
-kind of a low blow to blame the current state of affairs on Hermione and the others who fought against Voldemort since they were the only ones willing to take a stand.
-Millicent does raise a good point about the fact that there are very few 'good' guys left, it's all about who wins and who loses now.
Okay on second thought I guess I will read chapter 13 and add it to this review as well-
Chapter 13:
-Daphne is still a Slytherin and will play the odds to her advantage, but it is sweet how she is with Ginny. Protective and caring.
-Tracey you crazy little *&%$. Thought she would try something eventually although it was stupid too think she could fool anyone for very long.
-Ginny is the ultimate cinnamon bub, seriously even when the girl tried that stunt, she is still willing to forgive.
-So Tom says Ginny's name when he is with Stacey eh?
-Luna playing both sides of the field and keeping secrets from both since elements on both sides are too stubborn or hesitant to do what she says.
-Well Stacey is screwed when the Dark Lord makes time for her next.
-Lady Mercy, fitting I suppose.
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October 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
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September 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
-Damn that was cruel. Poor Ginny, even if it was all part of a plan couldnt they have found another way aside from outright rape?
-Even if the 'ggod' guys manage to win in the end and oust the new Death Eater regime, nothing will ever be the same again. The muggleborns will never forgive the purebloods for selling and buying them like cattle and Ginny even if she is told the reasons behind what was done to her and the plan to save Harry's soul she will have to live with it forever.
-Nott is certainly fucked if Ginny isn't feeling particularly forgiving. Hell Tom might just find an even more creative way of punishing him that doesn't involve execution.
-Aww I love how Daphne started out as trying to subtly manipulate Ginny and didn't care much for her to being so concerned for the girls safety and trying to look out for her and keep her sane and happy.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
-Even if the 'ggod' guys manage to win in the end and oust the new Death Eater regime, nothing will ever be the same again. The muggleborns will never forgive the purebloods for selling and buying them like cattle and Ginny even if she is told the reasons behind what was done to her and the plan to save Harry's soul she will have to live with it forever.
-Nott is certainly fucked if Ginny isn't feeling particularly forgiving. Hell Tom might just find an even more creative way of punishing him that doesn't involve execution.
-Aww I love how Daphne started out as trying to subtly manipulate Ginny and didn't care much for her to being so concerned for the girls safety and trying to look out for her and keep her sane and happy.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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September 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
good guys*
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September 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really need to visit this site more often. I didn't know you were updating again. Poor Ginny she is doing the best she can to survive and keep her family safe. I do hope Tom kills Michael in the most painful and creative way possible.
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September 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I forgot how much I loved this story! I'm prob gunna go back and read the first one now, and also smell of submission. Thanks for working on it!
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September 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WELCOME BACK
and I am so happy the identity of the prisoner has been confirmed
Will ave a much longer review posted at a later date as I am swamped at the moment.
and I am so happy the identity of the prisoner has been confirmed
Will ave a much longer review posted at a later date as I am swamped at the moment.