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for Smell of Submission

by dweek

person red demon
schedule May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see an update. No smut this time, but the plot moved forward. Harry almost has Hermione convinced and he had Ron almost as well. Can't wait for the next update.
person Maria
schedule April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I get the whole dom/sub thing it's great. But where are the dom women in hogwarts that would love to join the group. And yeah love hermione she is logical and passionate and strong. She should give as good as she gets let him stew after she has him break the contract. See how he likes yearning a bit. I like jealous potter. Keep up the if it's good and keeps me riveted.
person Chrryb
schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter :3
person red demon
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great update Harry turned things around with Hermione. I loved the way he was with his girls. Daphne is a good enforcer, anything to please Harry. I wonder just what are the limits she has. What Harry could order her to do before she hesitates.
person Emmiey
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter like always! Can't wait for the next one. I hope Hermione finally starts to finds herself.
person Wolfenstein
schedule March 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like the general concept of the story, but the problem I have is that Harry deceived and took advantage of Hermione's trust & friendship way back in Chapter 4, when he manipulated her mind while she was in a trance. In fact, he has lied to her repeatedly since. Without trust, you can't truly submit, otherwise it's just abuse.
person Chrryb
schedule March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I finished it so fast! I can't Wait for more!!
person x2alyx2
schedule March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nonono! why isn't this finished?! It's so good!
person Aranel
schedule February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aww!! I have been missing this story! So glad to see an update. Oh Hermione, you silly girl. Hope she learns her place soon.
Smart Harry, having a figure head. He would make a powerful leader.
person Luna/Wind
schedule February 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So, just felt like saying that you made a good day great by releasing another chapter. This is easily my favorite fic on AFF, I'd top ten ongoing that I'm reading period. I can think of no negatives to say at all. I eagerly await future chapters, and thank you for writing it.