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June 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, not sure how I feel about this chapter, Whip seems very forward and self righteous.
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May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nooo Hermione!!.... Next chapter soon? I need to know what happens...
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May 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. I hope you keep up your great work.
Thank you,
Terri
Thank you,
Terri
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May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
that is one hell of setback, But I think Hermione will end up with him regardless, I just hope she keeps her standing somewhat, because I have no reason to believe that Harry is going to be very forgiving or tolerant after he warned her of consequences of her actions.
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May 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. It was great. Loved Harry taking a strong hand with Daphne, all his girls want Hermione's place after all. It looks like Harry has a plan to deal with Hermione. It also looks like Ginny and Cho are going to be busy with Snape in the future.
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May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...that's perfect. "Getting all the parts of me you want, and none that you don't." And eventually, Hermione can sit back and enjoy seeing her Master enjoying himself by using others for the things that she doesn't want to do with him. Lucky Treasure. ;)
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May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is just fantastic. And I'm not only talking about the smut. Everything is just brilliant, and you've woven in the smut and more depraved writings seamlessly into the core of the story. Well done. I look forward to more and really, REALLY wish this site had an update alert.
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May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope Hermione comes to her senses! It won't be the same without her. I can sense a chapter a bit further along full of punishment for her though ;) The plot line of this is very interesting as well. I'm looking forward to how you develop it.
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May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good chapter. The only bad thing I would have to say is that it's a bit rough around the edges and just needs to be polished a bit more. In saying that, this is a good chaper to extend the story, without the sex. Just in idea, but can you start a fresh side story (not just one chapter to fill in the gaps of the main story, but a full fledged story) about Ron and Luna please??
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May 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Could do without the nicknames, its hard to follow who is who when you then change their name to "whip" etc., it would be better as a title but calling them by their name especially Hermoine, calling her pet, love or even kitten is one thing, popular pet names, but "treasure" is just horrible, again she can be his treasure but don't have him actually calling her treasure though