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by dweek

person Emmiey
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like Tracey, she is a good character and well balanced. Daphne grates me but she is also growing on me. The Hermione focus is great, I hope she comes back in to the fold, orgasm denial makes a great punishment by the way ;)
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This has been a good piece of work. Is he going to ever just finally settle for having just Herimone or what?
person d3mystic
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Couple of chapters for Harmony.... Hmmm.... So the necklace IS controlling her somewhat (or completely)... Nice chapter overall.
I think Hermione will be crying a lot when this ends. Will Harry make her pay for the things she's done... I'm confused about one thing though. Is Hermione confused about her nature or she knows but is not accepting it?

Next chapter sooner please..
person chm01
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope mine get back to she belongs soon.
person red demon
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Now that Ginny belongs to Snape I'm going to miss Harry's treatment of her. He doesn't even treat her like a person, I like it, well there is always Cho. It was pretty funny to see Ron as the voice of reason. Hope to see more of Harry with his girls next chapter. Can't wait.
person Emmiey
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Looking forward to seeing how Hermione and Cormacs relationship develops and Snape and Ginny's .
person Chrryb
schedule July 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
These new chapters make me so happy! and tingly inside. I feel like Hermione should be smart enough to realize that McLaggen is doing what he is doing? But I do love how this story is going. Can't wait for the next one!
person d3mystic
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please end this Cormac/Hermione soon. And don't let the necklace be something that controls her mind and have Hermione do something she will regret later on... please please please...
person djaddict
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry would be better off with someone who understands and appreciates him. He should just let Hermione go.
person red demon
schedule July 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is HOT. I like your Harry he is definitely playing things cool. I loved the last scene with Ginny. I liked how Harry mentioned selling her. Harry should use that as a threat with is other girls, if they're bad he would sell them to a brothel or something.