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August 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally... Can't wait for the sequel (or chapter).. would like to see more of Hermione's punishment.. the punishment she desires...
would have liked Harry to spill Cormac's blood...
So basically this fic was 'Hermione realises that there is a bit of submissive in her'.. Then the next fic will be like 'Hermione finds out the extent of her submissive nature'??
would have liked Harry to spill Cormac's blood...
So basically this fic was 'Hermione realises that there is a bit of submissive in her'.. Then the next fic will be like 'Hermione finds out the extent of her submissive nature'??
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August 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but the "Dark without being evil" does not play here. Giving someone pain as a punishment for doing something that you dislike IS evil, period and done with. No one has any right to cause someone pain simply because they do not like what they are doing in their own life.
Harry hasn't gone totally evil yet.... but his insistence on giving people 'pain' is driving him there at a quick pace in this story.
Harry hasn't gone totally evil yet.... but his insistence on giving people 'pain' is driving him there at a quick pace in this story.
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August 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad to see this end. I'll just have to wait for the sequel. Harry's got Hermione back and he gets to punish her in front of the order.
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August 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Frist time writing a review. I got to say, this is one of the best stories on here that combines smut, good story telling, a mastery of language and pacing, and characterization that make sense. I especially love how Ron wasn't turned into an asshole and Snape and Draco are still jerkish despite being on Harry's side. I can't wait for the sequel.
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August 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, and thanks for pointing me towards your blog, can't wait for September 7th now. And then...I'll be eagerly anticipating the sequel. I probably won't read the Ginny/Lucius thing you have planned no insult to you, but I've read the canon and fanfics too many times to tolerate Lucius ever being with someone and both of them being happy.
Fantastic work, keep it up.
Fantastic work, keep it up.
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August 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You're really taking it to the wire. I'll be waiting for the 7th (unless you want to post it a little early). I should hope that Hermione makes the choice in her best interest--to at least break free of the collar.
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August 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.. The Ravenclaw part of Hermione is back it seems.. Just waiting for the Gryffindor in her to wake up... Nice chapter..
Is there going to be a sequel or is this a stand alone fic?
If the story is coming to an end then I don't think you should put the chapter I asked in the story. But if you can, then please write a oneshot someday which shows Hermione's thoughts and emotions because she is the one(left)who needs to have her thoughts sorted out. This oneshot can show a glimpse of the future also...
Is there going to be a sequel or is this a stand alone fic?
If the story is coming to an end then I don't think you should put the chapter I asked in the story. But if you can, then please write a oneshot someday which shows Hermione's thoughts and emotions because she is the one(left)who needs to have her thoughts sorted out. This oneshot can show a glimpse of the future also...
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August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
so it begins, I hope that after she's freed form cormac, her denial about her own desires vanish or at least starts the process f vanishing.
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August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Astoria joins Harry and Hermione learns how to free herself. I hope Harry tans her hide in front of the Order for causing such a problem. I hope to see some more of Cho, we haven't seen her in a while.
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August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters. I really, REALLY hate that this site doesn't have an update notification feature. I've had to favourite your 'Stories Written' page, and label it as this fic name plus the last date it was updated along with the chapter I'm up to, and check on it once or twice a month.
Still, fantastic work. I find myself actually enjoying the plot line as opposed to the smut recently with your work. Usually doesn't happen unless the writer is particularly talented. Brilliant job, keep it up.
Still, fantastic work. I find myself actually enjoying the plot line as opposed to the smut recently with your work. Usually doesn't happen unless the writer is particularly talented. Brilliant job, keep it up.