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September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Harry actually used his skull here. He kept a low profile and at the same time advanced things with Hermione. He also pushed her without pushing too hard. He didn't go to far just enough to get her used to doing the things he tells her to do. I can't wait for more.
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September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You are on a roll. That was a hot chapter. I loved the part when Harry started to feel up on Hermione under the table and on top of that he just took what he wanted from Daphne.
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September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very well done! I love this competent dark!Harry! Keep up the great work!
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September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
first time I've seena submissive daphne, me likes
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September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Oh man oh man. Master Harry is on the scene!
Such a naughty boy, spotting a broken slytherin babe and making her his for kicks and giggles. Oh Harry is a busy boy, keeping Ron busy, keeping Hermione focused on him, finding a delightful bit to eat with which to test his dominate abilities.
I wish there had been a bit more information about the girl on the train, what was she all about? How did he feel about doing such a random thing with a random lady who he had never met. Sure he is a hormonal boy but his last experience was the most awkward thing. Tears and rebounds. Pink tea houses with little cupids. He isn't actually a natural Casanova. Has the strap brought out that in him as well or is Harry just a G?
Oh Hermione, she isn't as dumb as she is. I think she knows her skirt is being shortened. But it's being basically forced upon her. She gets to still be called a good girl and experience such pleasures with such a powerful figure whom she can get lovely praises from. It's just so perfect for her! A chance to please and get praised and pleasure! She comes out at the end still very innocent, with big eyes she can say "he mad me do it", could even let a tear out. That crafty wench.
Wow, I went on a tangent....I do love naughty Hermione. She has so many avenues she can venture down as an escape route and a means for which she could take everything to a whole other level. Crafty wench.
Can't wait for more! It's going to be a wonderful journey.
Such a naughty boy, spotting a broken slytherin babe and making her his for kicks and giggles. Oh Harry is a busy boy, keeping Ron busy, keeping Hermione focused on him, finding a delightful bit to eat with which to test his dominate abilities.
I wish there had been a bit more information about the girl on the train, what was she all about? How did he feel about doing such a random thing with a random lady who he had never met. Sure he is a hormonal boy but his last experience was the most awkward thing. Tears and rebounds. Pink tea houses with little cupids. He isn't actually a natural Casanova. Has the strap brought out that in him as well or is Harry just a G?
Oh Hermione, she isn't as dumb as she is. I think she knows her skirt is being shortened. But it's being basically forced upon her. She gets to still be called a good girl and experience such pleasures with such a powerful figure whom she can get lovely praises from. It's just so perfect for her! A chance to please and get praised and pleasure! She comes out at the end still very innocent, with big eyes she can say "he mad me do it", could even let a tear out. That crafty wench.
Wow, I went on a tangent....I do love naughty Hermione. She has so many avenues she can venture down as an escape route and a means for which she could take everything to a whole other level. Crafty wench.
Can't wait for more! It's going to be a wonderful journey.
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September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*Happy Dance, including lots of hip swaying*. Happy, happy, joy, joy; you took my suggestion and I am over the moon!!! I absolutely Love this story so far. I like that Harry can now tell who is submissive. And I absolutely LOVE that he did not even consider Ginny (never really liked that 'ship' anyway). I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, I do believe I will like this quite a bit
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September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was awesome. I really want to see more. There are not enough Dom Harry fics at least het fics. I can't wait for more.
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September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is great
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September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and awesome fast update. I adore the characterizations you have given to both Hermione and Harry and the nice steady pace that the plot is going, I love the submissiveness she shows while still remaining herself and how direct and commanding Harry is while not being too dark about it. Is Harry planning on making a harem perhaps?