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Ginny has been a bad girl. Honestly, what was she thinking, wearing panties. Oh she was asking for that spanking. I can relate, sadly my punishment has changed from spanks to the silent treatment, punisher wised up on how to get me hto really behave...
Really can't wait to see where he pushes Ginny, she really wants to be controlled. Which is funny since she has spent her whole life being guarded and treated like a precious gem by her mother and brothers. Now she just wants to be treated like a dirty slut with complete disregard and cruelty. What a saucy thing.
Good girl Mione! Oh what a sight that would have been. What wonderful restraint Harry had to show with Hermione laying with her head in his lap, pleasuring herself at his command. What a lovely picture. Oh more more! Really love to see Harry and Hermione interact. Hermione has this wonderful need to keep Harry happy. She just loves him so much an has seen so much pain in his life that she would do almost anything to keep a smile on his face. Gawd I love that pairing. He could really take things far with her. So slowly and sweetly. Yes, good girl indeed.

Don't you get my hopes up Kain. Never underestimate the lengths through which I will go to get a good swat.

Good story and characterisations. Good pacing. However Sex god!Harry is an over played trope. I mean really? After one time with a girl he is on par with "amazing sex". You could of at least given him a bit much experience with random OCs. Plus, just because he knows where a girls clit is doesn't mean he knows how to use it. Some girls like myself are so sensitive there (even more when I was a teenager)that pinching or mashing your fingers against there after only a few minutes of foreplay makes me want to punch a guys lights out. That shit HURTS and alot of inexperienced guys don't seem to even realize that. It would be nice if Harry focused on different aspects of foreplay a bit. I know he's a 16 year old guy but theres more then sex you know...plus he seems to be doing everything right instinctivly...bit unrealistic.

OMG, that was such a HOT chapter. I am sitting here fanning myself. The scene with Ginny was so wonderful and then having Hermione talk about her dark dream!!!! I was trying to kill time before a job interview (by phone); now what am I going to do?!?!? How am I going to focus on accounting numbers and procedures??? You are killing me here!!!!!!! Now I know...never to read a chapter from one of your stories before I have to be professional. BUT, IT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER...MORE, PLEASE!!!

this story is awesome your writing style is.. i have no words to describe. most other stories have it like wham bam and everyone is sex deviant but your story is so awesome in how harry is going smart and slow although i would prefer the story if harry was a more selfish lover(meaning he doesn't want to share his subs/toys with anyone else)but that is only a personal preference

Alas dear Aranel, it is fate that we continue to cross paths. Ours is an eternal dance formed through a shared love of all things awesomely written.

Another good chapter, I like the slow build you got going, are we going to see any more of greengras?

O...M....G.... MORE! I need MORE!!

great story so far. i wonder though what made hermione buy the sheath in the first place, was she drawn to the power it exuded or was there something else. starting in 6th year is an interesting choice, did u consider other years and was the choice made because of the changes in staff at the school or was it completely arbitrary. again great story cant wait for more.

Holy shit that was hot. He took Ginny down fast, poor girl didn't even stand a chance. It was nice to see Ginny as a sub to Harry, its rare I always see fics with him as the sub. He took down Daphne and Ginny fast and now he just about has Hermione right were he wants her. For some reason I want to see Harry add a little more humiliation to his girls.

Ah! I feel it, all the lovely manipulation feels just washing over this chapter! Ugh, I get chills with how gentle Harry can be, then at the drop of the hat he is on you with such determination and control. Ginny being unsure and scared was delicious! I feel that Harry got a little ahead of himself but Ginny came through in the end. Good girl, oh I love that phrase. Mmmmm...
I also love how these (with the exclusion of Harry at the moment) are all still very annoying teens who are jealous and petty and constantly horny and oh my glob reason number zeta dash five section B why I won't be having kids. Can't wait for Luna to get mixed up in all this. She seems like the type that could break away from Master Harry, I don't hold much hope for Hermione.
Hmm, why does Harry sound like Snape to me now. I like it.

Kain baby, may we dance like this time and time again. I do enjoy our disagreements. Especially when it leads to spankings. Oh! That was only in my head I think...pay me no mind.