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by dweek

person CUSPACECOWBOY
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Isn't Hermione going to be upset when she learns Harry is having sex with Ginny and other girls
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved that Ginny got rewarded for doing two things that Harry asked...what a good little slag. And the speech from Harry to Hermione was WONDERFUL *squirming in my chair*!!! Oh, I can see Draco coming over to Harry's (Dark Lord) side, very easily. The partial use of a Weasley can only ratchet ups Draco's interest. As we all know, a Weasley should always be beneath *growl* a Malfoy...especially when it is literally instead of figuratively! MORE, PLEASE!!!! p.s. I am really loving how Dark you are making Harry!
person anon
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Was good until this chapter. Getting tired of Harry suddenly making friends with all his enemies for no other reason than the author liking those characters.

Please just stick to the porn, that's what you're good at and that's why people read this site.
person Kain
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry is on a roll, training his girls, forming alliances, the boy is stepping his game up. Love the though that while he might be viewed as 'dark' by others he is not necessarily becoming evil. Manipulative and sexually promiscuous and ambitious but certainly not evil. He seems more or less grey, and while I don't see him trying to recruit the more evil death eaters like Bellatrix,Rodolphus, Fenrir(though this one would be interesting) ETC to his cause, I could see him making a play for the slightly more grey like minded wizards who haven't really committed any serious crimes.

also ignore that asshole anon. The reviews speak for themselves and people are obviously enjoying what you are doing.
person red demon
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok first this is one of the best things I have read in a while. Second the treatment of Ginny is to awesome for words. It sounds like Harry is going to let Draco have at Ginny. Harry doesn't give me the impression that he is willing to share. I hope we see some more of Daphne soon or at this point any other girl. I can't wait to see what you have planed next.
person Emily
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Harry is best out of all the guys in every way..
Im loving the Fic. Does hermione have a shaved pussy?. Physical discriptions would be awsome..i know you usually dont but it helps the imagination :)
person joeparas
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Kinky, hot story. I like it all - even the annoying parts where she fantasizes about a racist bigot, because she admits nothing like that would ever happen.

The only part I don't like is Harry fucking around on Hermione. You can be a dom without being a cheating cunt.
person afan
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you should put bellatrix in the story too
person red demon
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was hot. It was great. He denied Ginny sex and he made Hermione masturbate in public. It was an awesome chapter and your an updating machine.
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG, what a Fantastic chapter. Punishment of Ginny and of course she loved her punishment. Planning to become a new Dark Master. I love that he is determining who the Dominate Slytherians are. He can use the submissives that he finds to cultivate those alliances (I know you have already thought of that...but I couldn't help myself). And finally, getting Hermione to MASTURBATE IN THE LIBRARY!!!!! WOW, that was awesome. Thank you for your comment on the timing. But I just have to devour your chapters when they show up (what can I say...I'm addicted). More...please!!!!