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October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff so far. I would like to see maybe a girl be turned into a whipping toy. I would also like to see some more humiliation/bondage. And I would definitely like Harry to collar some girls. While the girls can love what he does, make sure to emphasize the humiliation for them please. I also want him to totally dominate a teacher. Sinistra or maybe another. Keep up the great work.
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October 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Promises promises Potter. You better make her walk funny.
Daphne and Tracy, there's an interesting pairing. Harry seems to be enjoying himself, hope he gets back to Hermione soon.
I feel the story is going great, I still don't know how Harry plans to rebuild a country. Don't know what classes he's been taking at Hogwarts but I don't remember courses on management or budgeting or family and consumer science. Shit takes work...that's all I'm saying. It's just like the president job here in America, nobody really wants that job, but somebody has to do it.
Check out Bitstream Charter! I love the Q and the Jj. So nice. Simple and striking at the same time.
Daphne and Tracy, there's an interesting pairing. Harry seems to be enjoying himself, hope he gets back to Hermione soon.
I feel the story is going great, I still don't know how Harry plans to rebuild a country. Don't know what classes he's been taking at Hogwarts but I don't remember courses on management or budgeting or family and consumer science. Shit takes work...that's all I'm saying. It's just like the president job here in America, nobody really wants that job, but somebody has to do it.
Check out Bitstream Charter! I love the Q and the Jj. So nice. Simple and striking at the same time.
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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say, with complete and utter sincerity; "Thank you"
It has been quite a while since there has been a fic in this section that starred Harry as the main character (and he's not gay) and is decently (or better) written. Lately it seems that if Harry is going to be mentioned in the summary it's right as the pairing and he's paired with Draco/Snape/some-random-guy and etc. Even though you mainly use Draco as your main guy, it's cool that you can come back and start a fic with Harry in the lead instead.
Again, thank you.
It has been quite a while since there has been a fic in this section that starred Harry as the main character (and he's not gay) and is decently (or better) written. Lately it seems that if Harry is going to be mentioned in the summary it's right as the pairing and he's paired with Draco/Snape/some-random-guy and etc. Even though you mainly use Draco as your main guy, it's cool that you can come back and start a fic with Harry in the lead instead.
Again, thank you.
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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I'm glad he's focusing, and it's not too easy.
Interesting that he can already smell Longbottom in War Cardigan mode :) I like the idea of Harry arranging Luna for Neville.
Interesting that he can already smell Longbottom in War Cardigan mode :) I like the idea of Harry arranging Luna for Neville.
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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i sure hope harry doesn't share hermione with snape or draco. i dont mind him learning their tricks by using daphne and ginny. but any dramione or snape/hermione stuff will put me off frm this story even though i am enjoying it right now. well such is the story of hhr fan. though adding narcissa and mrs.granger to his harem will be very hot
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October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Daphne may be thinking above her station. But I am sure Harry will put her back in her place rather deviously *rubbing hands together*! I love the lessons from the slave to the slut!! I also like how Ginny is both frightened and excited about being used to gather allies to Harry's cause. And another Slytherian slut/slave is added to the ranks! More, Please!!!!
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October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. Harry played Hermione like a fiddle. She was like a deer in the headlights. He's got Ginny wrapped around his little finger and Daphne is falling in line. Thanks for the scenes with Daphne I had be wanting to see her again.
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October 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry is very busy.
I hope he does get his font right, that could make or break his regime. Can you imagine? Comic sans, everywhere...ugh...
Loved what you did with Hermione! I could totally see her feeling that way, if darker pleasures were her things. Seeing herself in the house elves and becoming frightened by the mirrored image. Genius.
Oh what will Tracy bring to the table, what fun.
I hope you didn't think I was suggesting the PWP stories to you. I was offering them to anon since he had taken a wrong turn somewhere and ended up with some plot mixed in his smut. You do you boo boo, cause you do it great!
I hope he does get his font right, that could make or break his regime. Can you imagine? Comic sans, everywhere...ugh...
Loved what you did with Hermione! I could totally see her feeling that way, if darker pleasures were her things. Seeing herself in the house elves and becoming frightened by the mirrored image. Genius.
Oh what will Tracy bring to the table, what fun.
I hope you didn't think I was suggesting the PWP stories to you. I was offering them to anon since he had taken a wrong turn somewhere and ended up with some plot mixed in his smut. You do you boo boo, cause you do it great!
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September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
really great story i really hope this doesn't turn into a dead story, and that you manage to complete all chapters.
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September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, taking a turn. I wonder what Harry would do with the power and playing field that voldemort possesses. Honestly, do villains ever really think of how they will run the world after they take it over? There are mouthed to feed, regulations to be up in place and upheld, rebels (always rebels), currency depreciation, and higher ups to deal with all the time. Ugh and then there is the design! You have to pick a logo that represents your cause or self meaning. Then you must pick a color scheme, layout designs, stationary, fonts (homg fonts are so important!!), output, advertisements, spokes men, etc. (I'm a graphic designer, I think of these things)
such hard work taking over the world. That's why I haven't done it. I guess if it was his plan to simply have a kingdom to rule in instead of countries, that might make more sense. Hmm.
Kinda thrown by his distrust for good old Dumbiedorie(my mom's nickname for headmaster, just kinda stuck). Sure the old coot was up to some shinanigans but Harry knew that the headmaster loved him. I guess when you're taking over a regime, it's hard to trust people. i hope Draco comes around, Ginny would learn well from him. Lol what a funny polyamourous family they all would make under Harry's control.
Can't wait for more Hermione and Harry time, sans the Draco interruptions. Haha! Harry gave her the silent treatment. What did I say! That shit always works. Damn annoying too! Nothing like a good strong hand though.
As for disgruntled readers, haters gonna hate. This guy obviously needs something to wank to, there's a bit too much story line getting in between him and a good fix. Poor guy. If you really need a fix, I can suggest a few great stories. Nothing but da fucks. Rustle up your jimmies for you.
such hard work taking over the world. That's why I haven't done it. I guess if it was his plan to simply have a kingdom to rule in instead of countries, that might make more sense. Hmm.
Kinda thrown by his distrust for good old Dumbiedorie(my mom's nickname for headmaster, just kinda stuck). Sure the old coot was up to some shinanigans but Harry knew that the headmaster loved him. I guess when you're taking over a regime, it's hard to trust people. i hope Draco comes around, Ginny would learn well from him. Lol what a funny polyamourous family they all would make under Harry's control.
Can't wait for more Hermione and Harry time, sans the Draco interruptions. Haha! Harry gave her the silent treatment. What did I say! That shit always works. Damn annoying too! Nothing like a good strong hand though.
As for disgruntled readers, haters gonna hate. This guy obviously needs something to wank to, there's a bit too much story line getting in between him and a good fix. Poor guy. If you really need a fix, I can suggest a few great stories. Nothing but da fucks. Rustle up your jimmies for you.