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Oh, I have now had my fix!!!!! Cock Toy and Fuck Slut, that little exercise was great. Poor little Fuck Slut did not get a reward, but Cock Toy sure did. Whip, I love the name for his regular slave!! Poor Vixen, but Harry will make sure that Nott pays...especially if one of the muggleborns that she had to pretend to be was Hermione!?!?!?!?! The training (meditation) with Hermione was PRICELESS!!! I can't wait for Harry to ask her about her dreams *evil snicker*. This story is more than I could have hoped for, I am very glad that you chose my suggestion. This story is FANTASTIC...more, please *knelling at your muse's feet*!!!!

Hi!!!

I just came across your story and I love it!!! I love how you make Harry take control of Hermione and other girls, but he is still being sweet and always thinking about Hermione and her safety!!

I also like that you added Cho to the group of girls and I wonder what will be her interaction with the other girls, I would love to see her with Hermione and Ginny and Harry of course.

Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!

You consistently write "dominate" instead of "dominant".

Good stuff. I really like how Harry is progressing from girl to girl as he slowly drags Hermione down into debauchery.

I guess I meant a girl that Harry trains until she gets off on being whipped. Though I really liked your idea about transfiguring a girl into a whip. Seems a little too hard for Harry to accomplish yet though. I am also hoping for Harry to totally dominate Tonks. A girl that can change into anyone else, you know that Harry would want that. You might have actually used Tonks already in the early chapters... can't remember exactly. Anyway, I really want Harry to 'bind her to his will' at some point. Keep up the good work.

Oh, I love the differences between; slave, slut, and pet!!!! I'm having difficulty deciding which I want to be. But I guess my name gives me away any way. I am glad that both slave and pet were rewarded, they were such 'good girls'. I wonder how docile Luna is? So Harry's new pet is a vixen...that was priceless!!!! More, Please! p.s. I am LOVING how Dark Harry is becoming!!!

Holy shit that was hot. Hermione is still fighting it I see, well she wouldn't be the crown jewel in Harry's mind if she were that easy to subdue. Cho is trying to fight it but she is already gone she just doesn't know it yet. I like you added Cho. I see her get added to harem fics all the time only for her to be ignored after she was introduced.

hermione sure is stubborn, I wonder how long will she hold up?

I liked that Hermione said she would take her punishment and reward for the house-elves. Harry's comment to invite Dobby was PRICELESS!!! Hermione is too stubborn for her own good, she is only stifling her inner-slave *snicker*. I thought a submissive Slughorn was a wonderful idea. Now Harry just needs a Dominate female ally, who should also be a masochist too!!!! Now Harry has two sluts to use as incentives for his allies. I think 'Cock Toy' would be a great reward for Snape. He can scare 'Cock Toy' endlessly, making her more than able to take his dark brand of Dominance!!!!! What will his other slut be named? Agh, I can't believe that you left us hanging like that *growl*!!!!!!!

Hmmm, alright, I'll be a graphic designer. But only if I can be a pet. A cat, sneaky and always watching and waiting to pounce.
Haha! Harry had to slow himself down, I think he is realizing that he is getting quite the load to juggle. What is that now? Five girls? All of which need his attention and guidance. Is he even doing his homework anymore?
Oooh. What will Draco baby use his potion for? Can't wait for him to come back, such a fun thing he is.
Oh my glob Hermione, just be honest with yourself. Such an ego she has, can never be seen as going back on her words. Yeah it's for the elves and sure she thinks slavery is awful, but she loves it and she can't lie to Harry too much longer. Unless she wants more spanks. Hehehe

Love the new update. I also loved Tracy becoming a pet, she is not even really human to him anymore. Not sure about any kinks, but maybe we could see some chastity belt, orgasm denial, and making the girls dress slutty like short skirts (already started on Hermione though) lingerie, heels, costumes(French maid anyone).