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Hi again!!!

I really enjoy this chapter. First I really love the interaction of Cho with the rest of girls, I love how sweet and caring Harry is being with her and the rest of the girls.

And the last part when Harry talks to Hermione about her feelings it was so sweet. I love that Harry is giving Hermione all the time she news to acepts her innner feeling and desires.

Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!

Hi again!!!

This was an interesting chapter!!! I'm curious of the aproach of Harry using his girls to gather allies as Draco.

Oh! And I would be great that Luna would become Ron's girl.

Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!

Hi again!!!

Wow! I don't know how to tell you in word how I love this chapter!!! I knew it was going to be worth the wait, and Harry knew it too. Firstly because deep down Harry knows that Hermione is his one true love, and because of that Harry has being going with Hermione step by step, so they could enjoy their first time together the best they could.

I'm really looking forward to see how Hermione now fits with Harry and his other girls.

Again thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!

Alright now this was a great chapter. I just love how Harry holds court, all his girls naked, on their knees, and looking at the ground. I especially loved the sex shop scene. I thought Harry was going to take Hermione there and show her the stuff he was going to use on her, but it work just as well with Tracy there. I liked how Harry and the owner were talking about Tracy like she wasn't even there. I get the feeling that the Dominatrix is going to recommend that the best tool for a slave that forgets her place is a switch (cane). I can't wait to see what you are going to have Harry buy for use on his girls.

Oh, I do love plot twists (even if there is no sex involved in the chapter *giggle*). I like that Harry wants to help Neville gain more confidence. Cho needs to watch her tongue...actually she needs to put it to better use; like on Neville *evil laugh*!!! I am glad that Mr. D and Mr. M are moving in the right direction, and of course with open use of Fuck Toy as a bonus. I absolutely loved the scene in the store. Poor Vixen, she will need to be punished before she can be rewarded. But I think this store owner and her wares *ROFL* will help Harry with that. BTW, I am ahead on my writing and I had to sneak over here for a quick peak. So I am reading this chapter and your side chapter as my reward!!!!! It is a win-win, I get rewarded with a chapter and you get another review!

Great update. Harry and Hermione had their big night. I loved the part when Harry told her that his rules are the only rules that matter and the part when he asked who she belonged to. I also loved her new nick name.

Thanks for concentrating on Harry and Hermione. Splitting off the side stories is a good way to go about it. I'm glad he got to fully claim his treasure :)

OH *melting into a puddle of goo in my chair*! That was WONDERFUL, MARVELOUS!!! I almost fell off my chair when Harry told Hermione that he was going to put her in charge of 'panting and moaning'...and I think she did an AMAZING job of it too!!!!! More, more, more...PLEASE!!!!

good, but I hope luna become ron slave it get tireing reading about harry getting all the girl ron should get one or two,

Oh, I love that Draco brought a friend and as soon as I finish this review, I am running over to read the chapter about the threesome *rubbing hands together*!!! I like that Ron needs Hermione's help to get started with Luna. And I LOVED the two comments by Hermione and then Harry about being bossy and knowing what one wants. That was great! As always...More, Please!!!!