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by dweek

person zemfira
schedule December 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic. And I am glad that Hermione start to struggle. And I hope she will be not punishment.
person hotflower901
schedule December 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harry had to see that coming.
person tinkerbabe7
schedule December 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
O.O
Can't say I didn't expect that reaction from Hermione when she found out about Harry's other girls. I wonder what Harry will do now... He's obviously going to be mad about getting hit, but did it think it would not happen? Ughhhh I can't wait for your next post on here. I wanna know what happens next!!!!!!
person walters1
schedule December 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really good story! But please update soon! It's been ages!!!
schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am back ;)! I just finished chapter 15, I soooo love a good flogging. And every good submissive needs a collar, we feel naked and unowned, without it. Now on to chapter 16 and more good stuff.
schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent plot chapter. I love the little innuendos that Harry said to Ron, but were intended for Hermione. I also, think that Cho will LOVE being a submissive to Snape. I know I would!! More, Please!!
person Tharos
schedule November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello wildkitsune
I'm really enjoying the story you are writing and I would like to know if you know how long you plan on making the story if you know how long you wish it to be

Please continue this great story And Please please please Don't abandon it

Tharos
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love the way the story is developing!
person red demon
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see an update. You spoil us with fast ones. Loos like Cho has got a tough mission from Harry. I am loving this fic. It's rare enough to see Hermione sub to Harry, but it is even rarer to see Cho and Ginny submissive to Harry.
person Lichblade
schedule November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For chapter 15 you forgot the rule for Hermione's punishments: She didn't kiss and thank the flogger before it was used.