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You're back! With a great chapter as well! Looking forward to the next one, hopefully we'll see a bit of Treasure and Master action?

All right an update. I was hoping for one. I just love the way Harry treated Tracy, like she's not there. I also loved the orgasm denial Harry put her through, maybe he should forbid her to cum without his express permission. Now I really want to see Hermione's punishment. I can't but help wonder what Harry is going to do to her. Personally I hope it involves heels and a French maid uniform:).

Oh shit. There's some serious punishment coming her way. I wonder what she'd think of Whip living up to her name in front of her?

Good that the conversation happened, though. Once she comes around, she'll both have made progress to accepting her place and will be more useful as she can be involved in planning.

Other then some minor spelling mistakes, you have writen one of the best books here.. And that is a rare thing to see here. The book in my opinion is a bit quirky, dark, unique and makes you think every step of the way. There is only a very small number of books that I would say are the best in the bussiness, but this book for me, has earnt it. The combo of this main book and your side story's, make for an interesting read. You dear lady, have done very well with this book and I tip my hat to you.

What a great chapter! I sense Hermione has one huge punishment coming her way!! Please update as soon as you can!!

I wonder how long will it take for hermione to go back to him?

outch...
awesome chapter,
continuuuuuuue,
z.

First, what con are you going to? Second, thank you for your emails inquiring about my novel...BTW I am in the process of editing it (Ugh :|). Third, a chapter (actually two) for Christmas, Yippy!?!?! I like that Ron now has his own slave and that Luna is so receptive. Poor Hermione...she needs to listen and learn were her place in the hierarchy. Only then will she understand what her name truly means to Harry. But she is in for a BIG punishment, she might not be able to sit for a week...at least. Happy Holidays and I hope you can post sooner. But either way...I will wait!!!!!!

My problem with this fic is that Harry is doing all the work breaking in the girls and learning the trade himself and other guys are just benefitting and only giving Harry their word that they'll support him. I mean, where is his control of the guys? And I don't mean sexually. Why is he even taking an inch of bullshit from Ron, who has his own slave yet can be outraged at Harry/Hermione. Is he going to "catch" cho/Snape in the act and blackmail? How the hell is Cho going to seduce that ashley anyway, no way he'd give into that. When are Draco and Blaise going to fully realize who is runnin things? Reiteration: Harry is doing all the work while others simply benefit.

Oh boy did Hermione forget that she's Harry's property. Methinks she is going to get punished big time. I'm guessing Harry forces her to fuck one of his girls.