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October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
Technical writing is good, few errors. Premise is believable, characters are in character.
The sex portion is not only fairly hot, it's flavored with genre appropriate elements. Nothing is more boring than a sex scene in Harry Potter that reads lime a sex scene out of any ol porn video. This one is chock full of engorgios and crazy dangerous Bellatrix and decadent purebloods.
Well done!
Technical writing is good, few errors. Premise is believable, characters are in character.
The sex portion is not only fairly hot, it's flavored with genre appropriate elements. Nothing is more boring than a sex scene in Harry Potter that reads lime a sex scene out of any ol porn video. This one is chock full of engorgios and crazy dangerous Bellatrix and decadent purebloods.
Well done!
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August 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was... intense.
And surprisingly hot.
And surprisingly hot.
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November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Don't believe I've ever read BL/NM/HG before, but after this I'm thinking I could get to like it. Certainly the most entertaining and unusual HP smut I've seen all day, if only because of Hermione's magical cock. Well done!
Love your Bellatrix: so crazy, so lustful, so totally out of control. She had my attention most thoroughly as soon as she put Hermione's tongue to work at the start of the story. And then, her idea of a Christmas present, OMG! That whole scene where Narcissa's riding the bound Hermione, while Bellatrix critiques their performance and interrupts - oh, fabulous. So was the moment when Hermione made the tactical error of coming and screaming Ron's name. I couldn't help laughing.
Hope Hermione really, really does "do her worst" there at the end. For Gryffindor and the Greater Good, of course.
Love your Bellatrix: so crazy, so lustful, so totally out of control. She had my attention most thoroughly as soon as she put Hermione's tongue to work at the start of the story. And then, her idea of a Christmas present, OMG! That whole scene where Narcissa's riding the bound Hermione, while Bellatrix critiques their performance and interrupts - oh, fabulous. So was the moment when Hermione made the tactical error of coming and screaming Ron's name. I couldn't help laughing.
Hope Hermione really, really does "do her worst" there at the end. For Gryffindor and the Greater Good, of course.
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October 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good fic.
I hope to read the continuation with Bella and Hermione.
I hope to read the continuation with Bella and Hermione.
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September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy hell, that was hot.
Yuri/Futa/Threesome all in one? There is not nearly enough of that combo on this sight. Please keep writing, perhaps a sequel with a captured Tonks or a prequel with Andromeda?
Yuri/Futa/Threesome all in one? There is not nearly enough of that combo on this sight. Please keep writing, perhaps a sequel with a captured Tonks or a prequel with Andromeda?