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for Storm

by Emmaliene

schedule April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You made a lovely family dynamic and an adorable little girl. I liked your softer Lucius. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
person ChaosLady
schedule February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think a second chapter to this could get any better, but it did!
person phoenix26
schedule December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was cute :). I loved it and wouldnt mind reading more ;).
person Heather
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a great oneshot! I very much enjoyed reading it and would love another where Lucius has two grandbabies to care for.
person delia cerrano
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well done...especially well done for a new writer. Just don't like Hermione paired with Draco, Lucius or Harry. Cute mental picture of Lucius the big bad deatheater dealing with a small granddaughter then son & daughter in law walking in
to see it.
person Outlawgal
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it especially the last part from Hermione. That was a great line. Nice little one-shot
person ChaosLady
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is good.
person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think this was a sweet little story. We so rarely get to see Lucius in a tender role. Well done.
schedule September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It was short but sweet...I can enjoy fluff from time to time. Hope you continue to write.