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for Vivisection

by LumosMinima

person M3
schedule September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi guys it's me once again!

Couldn't leave without reviewing. Yesterday while reading when the two of them were chatting in the end of ch. I was holding my breath. I was so happy. That's the Severus I love <3<3<3 I liked them much more in this ch. Kind of :)
I really appreciate u writing this story. Can't wait till next ch. is up. I had my matriculation examination yesterday and 8 hours befor that I noticed u had been updating, I was so happy and started reading that I allmost forgot I had the exam in the morning.

I can't help cheking every other day almost :)
(sorry for any spelling mistakes, english is not my mother language, it's third)

have to go sleep now, bye

ps. Remember to upload soon :)

person M3
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hello love,

it's me again :)
I couldn't believe when I saw that u had wrote new ch!! I'm so happy and have been cheking every other day if u had updated.
And here it is!!
Thank you hon<3<3 so nice of u :D

I really love the way Snape acts in this ch. Ans I really was holding my breath when they were chatting in the end. I like how u write, keep us on hold. Keep up the good work!

And update soon plz :D (sorry for my bad english, it's not my mother language, it's third)
ow god, I have my second matriculation examination in 8 hours and I'm here reviewing :p
gotta go to sleep I guess...

Remember to continue :D<3
person delia cerrano
schedule September 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There is something more to Snape. I hate that Harry was so brutal, at least without talking to Harry a bit more to see what he did do during the war. Something is off here or is that wishful thinking on my part?
person M3
schedule September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
heey, liked ur story a lott. But in the end made my stomach twist with guilt. Don't like Harry in that way so much but thinking in that situaition it's quite understandable.

I like how u write and the plot is getting interesting, I would love to read more of this story, so would u update soon, pretty pleas?

Poor Snape D: don't let him suffer too long : )

with love
- M3hku
person delia cerrano
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading hoping this will have a happy ending and that Severus & Harry will straighten out whatever went wrong between Severus & the rest of the world. I love them as a couple to much to want anything else.
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hmmm. Interesting. Very nicely set up. Looking forwaed to reading more.
person MelR
schedule September 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm very intrigued! Please update soon.