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for Vivisection

by LumosMinima

person AJPicard
schedule January 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. It is a very interesting concept that you have. Please update soon.
person M3
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hello,

very intriguing chapter, I can't wait to read more when u update :) really like this story and pity poor Snape for going that through :(
I like how it's turning up, it's good that Harry didn't just leave Snape be on his on
person Sera21
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is dark and depressing as all hell . Well written, deeply intriging but I think I need to go google a puppy sneezing or a kitten chasing its tail or something just so that I can have some happiness back in my day. Damn. Also on a side note I don't think Luna is being unkind to Dolohov, in fact just the opposite. Kindness in teh face of hatred. Because that is what the world needs. Not more hate to follow hate.
person Sera21
schedule September 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So I've been thinking about this and was wondering why Harry couldn't remember what happened with Draco and whome he killed. Wasn't Lupin quite important to him? How could he forget that? Or is that a plot point? Your story kind of reminds me of " Ashes of Armegedon" by Emily Waters which is also really dark. Except that Ron and Hermione are still alive and they turn out to be the main ones who help set things right ( Harry turns dark!). At this point Harry really has nobody to turn to which is depressing as heck and I hope he doesn't go down the path of darkness because nobody is gonna be able to get him back...
person qwerty
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is really good. I'm super engaged with this story. Keep going!
person delia cerrano
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Maybe this time Harry will find some clue as to why Snape did or didn't do what he was accused of. I know Harry thought Snape did horrible stuff but I was surprised that this Harry reacted so violently without even any discussion/question.
schedule September 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh just wonderful! That dialogue between Moody and Harry was some of the best I've ever read. This story gets better and better!

Can't wait for more :)
person M3
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hey would love to read more again when ur ready to update :)
It was nice reading new ch. and really interesting. Can't wait till Severus comes back :D

I will be waiting :) take ur time
and thnx for writing <3
schedule September 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is incredible. Snape and Harry's interactions are so tense and filled with this strange longing. I love the way you've characterized Snape in this story. Please update soon!
person M3
schedule September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi guys it's me once again!

Couldn't leave without reviewing. Yesterday while reading when the two of the were chatting in the end of ch. Iwas holding my breath. I was so happy. That's the Severus I love <3<3<3
I really appreciate u writing this story. Can't wait till next ch. is up. I had my matriculation examination yesterday and 8 hours befor that I noticed u had been updating, I was so happy and started reading that I allmost forgot I had the exam in the morning.

I can't hel cheking every other day almost :)
(sorry for any spelling mistakes, english is not my mother language, it's third)

have to go sleep now, bye

ps. Remember to upload soin :)